Question

【題目】假定你是李華，最近獲悉你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Peter家鄉(xiāng)受到颶風(fēng)(hurricane)侵襲，損失慘重。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給Peter寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信。信的內(nèi)容包括：

1. 得知情況及感受；

2. 表達(dá)安慰和鼓勵(lì)；

3. 打算提供的幫助。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit your hometown and caused a great loss. Shocked to learn the terrible news, I feel upset about your suffering.

Though sorrowful, you have to be tough to stand up to any bad conditions. I think you, as a strong-willed person, can get through this difficult period. You will definitely gather all your courage to face and handle the mess that the hurricane brought about.

Thinking about your present situation, I feel sincere pity for you, and I’ll be there for you whenever you need any help! If necessary, I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the difficultly.

Never give up hope and be strong! Longing for good news from you!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信，表達(dá)對(duì)朋友的關(guān)心和幫助。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：分-總法

分-總法指分點(diǎn)表達(dá)要點(diǎn)之后，在最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)。

要求：

1. 得知情況及感受；

2. 表達(dá)安慰和鼓勵(lì)；

3. 打算提供的幫助。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

horrible，severe，hurricane, hit , loss, upset , stand up to, get through, bring about, whenever ,help, call on, make a donation, give up

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit your hometown and caused a great loss.

2. I feel upset about your suffering

3. you have to be tough to stand up to any bad conditions

4. I think you, as a strong-willed person, can get through this difficult period.

5…. face and handle the mess that the hurricane brought about.

6. I feel sincere pity for you

7. I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the difficultly.

8. Never give up hope

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改