Question

假設(shè)下面四幅圖畫描述了你們班Lily和Lina在上學(xué)路上發(fā)生的一幕。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片的先后順序，為�？�“英語園地”寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于60。

    注意：1. 短文必須包括圖畫的主要內(nèi)容，并簡(jiǎn)要發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。

          2. 提示詞：救護(hù)車ambulance

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:   

    One day, Lily and Lina were going to school happily when a speeding car ran into them. One of them was seriously injured and lay on the street, unconscious. Seeing the terrible scene, the driver drove his car away as fast as he could without stopping. At the very moment, some passersby rushed over. One man called 120 to get help. Minutes later, an ambulance came with a siren wailing. The injured girl was carried into the ambulance by a passerby and sent quickly to hospital.

    From the story we can see such people as the guilty driver should be punished by law. We do believe there are many more warm-hearted people in our society.

【解析】本文是最近比較流行的看圖作文，對(duì)考生的要求比較高，需要考生有很強(qiáng)的讀圖理解和組織語言的能力。通過審題確立要點(diǎn)以及文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)。要點(diǎn)分為：兩個(gè)人開心上學(xué)；一輛車撞上了他們，司機(jī)逃逸；路人打120急救車。受傷的人被送往醫(yī)院，最終得救。最后再發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。在寫作時(shí)要注意選用高級(jí)詞匯，并使用合適的連接詞和高級(jí)句型，讓文章更上檔次。