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第二節(jié)讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)（共1小題，滿(mǎn)分25分）
閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文．
Growing up to Be Independent
Growing up is not always easy. When facing difficulties, courage and a spirit of independence can be morn useful than crying for help. That's what Hong Zhanhui's story of growing from boy to man with family hardships tells us.
Hong who was born 1982 in a poor family in Xinhua County, Henan Province is now a hero in people's mind. When he was only 11, his father became mentally ill and one day came back with an abandoned baby girl. A year later, Hong's mother and younger brother both left home because of poverty and pressure from his sick father. Their burdens fell onto the 12-year-old's shoulders: to treat his father's illness, bring up the adopted sister Chenchen, and to go on to study.Hong didn't give up. Since a young age, he has worked in part-time jobs to feed his family. At the same time, he has studied at college. To take care of Chenchen, he worked hard to rent a room
near his campus for her, and send her to school. After Hong's story went public, people were moved to tears by his unselfishness. Hard as his life sas, Hong didn't abandon his father and the adopted sister, because they needed his help. With his hard-won money, he even aided other students struggling against misfortunes.
Hong's story shows that with love and willpower, no hardship can defeat a person but himself.So when facing difficulties, don't complain about bad luck. Consider what morn you could do for your family and society and you'll find the world smiling back.
假設(shè)你是一名讀者，你讀到了以上關(guān)于洪戰(zhàn)輝的報(bào)道后，你想寫(xiě)信與他交朋友，在鼓勵(lì)他的同時(shí)和他分享你自己的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷。
在信的開(kāi)頭介紹你讀到的關(guān)于他的報(bào)道，以約30年詞概括以上文章的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。
以約120個(gè)詞就“成長(zhǎng)和獨(dú)立”為主題，寫(xiě)一篇感想。并包括以下要點(diǎn)。
1．你讀完這篇報(bào)道后有什么感想？你認(rèn)為獨(dú)立精神對(duì)青少年成長(zhǎng)的作用是什么？
2．請(qǐng)記敘在你自己成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中就獨(dú)立精神的培養(yǎng)的真實(shí)或虛構(gòu)的一次經(jīng)歷.
寫(xiě)作要求
1．作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Hong,                                            
Recently I have read your story in the newspaper that you who was a poor student grow up to be independent. You manage to study well as well as take care of your sick father and adopted sister by working in spare time.
I'm quite moved by your story.I think we teenagers could learn a lot from you. You're independent, hard-working, persevering, kind and optimistic and you live a hard but meaningful life. It's known to all that a spirit of independence can have a good effect on adolescents. It helps push us to learn more and lead us not to give way to difficulties.
Learning to be independent is beneficial to us. I want to share my story with you. Little child as I was 10 years ago, I was independent so that I went to school on my own. One heavy raining afternoon, I was on my way home alone though it rained cats and dogs. Despite the rain, I walked so carefully that I wouldn't fall to the ground. At last, I went home safe. My parents were anxious waiting for me at home and they felt so proud of me. After reading your story, I really want to make friends with you. I hope we can meet someday.
Yours,
Li Hua

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