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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（x)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

On Mother's Day,Tom stopped his car outside a flower's shop.He wanted to order some nice flowers and ask a shop to deliver them to his mother.He was about to enter the shop while he saw a little girl crying by the roadside.Tom asked her for what had happened.The girl said she wanted to buy a rose for her mother,and had no money.Hearing this,Tom went in and bought a beautifully rose for the girl.Then he offered to drive her home,but she insisted she was going to another town by bus to send the rose to mother.Tom was so touching that he changed his mind.After driving her to the bus station,he returned to the shop,buy a large bunch of flowers, and drove all the way to his mother.He would give the flowers to his mother with person.

【答案】第一句：flower’s→flower

第二句：a→the

第三句：while→when

第四句：去掉介詞for

第五句：and→but

第六句：beautifully→beautiful

第七句：mother前面加her

第八句：touching→touched

第九句：buy→bought

第十句：with→in

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文。母親節(jié)，湯姆準備定一束花，讓花店把花送給媽媽。然后他碰到了一位沒錢，但是想給媽媽買玫瑰的小女孩，他給她買了一束漂亮的玫瑰。接著他主動提出送她回家，但小女孩堅持坐公交車去另外一個小鎮(zhèn)，把花送給她的媽媽。被小女孩所感動，湯姆決定買一束花，并親自把花送給自己的媽媽。


第一處：考查名詞作定語。“花店”在英語中為flower shop, 英語中，名詞可以作定語修飾名詞,作定語的名詞往往是說明其中名詞的材料、用途、時間、地點、內容、類別等。故將flower’s改成flower。

第二處：考查定冠詞。這里的花店是指前文提到過的“a flower shop”，為特指，應該用定冠詞來修飾。故將a改成the。

第三處：考查固定句型。句意：湯姆正準備走進這家店時，看見一位小女孩在路邊哭泣。這里使用的是固定句型be about to do...when（ 剛要做某事時，此時……），故將while改成when。

第四處：考查固定搭配。句意：湯姆問她發(fā)生了什么。ask sb sth為固定搭配，意為“問某人某事”，ask sb for sth意為“向別人索要什么”，根據(jù)句意，這里使用的是ask sb sth結構，for是多余的，故將for去掉。

第五處：考查連詞。根據(jù)前文“The girl said she wanted to buy a rose for her mother,”可知女孩想要給媽媽買花，根據(jù)后文“ had no money.”可知小女孩沒錢，前后文為轉折關系，應該用but，而不是and連接前后文，故將and改成but。

第六處：考查形容詞。修飾名詞rose，應用形容詞，故將beautifully改成beautiful。

第七處：考查形容詞性物主代詞。句意：接著他主動提出送她回家，但她堅持坐公交車去另外一個小鎮(zhèn)，把花送給她的媽媽。根據(jù)句意，這里女孩送花的對象是自己的媽媽，所以為了表意明確，在mother前加her。

第八處：考查形容詞。句意：湯姆如此感動，以至于他改變了主意。touching意為“令人感動的”，用在此處不符合句意，touched意為“感到感動的”符合句意，故將touching改成touched。

第九處：考查時態(tài)。分析可知return,buy以及drove是并列謂語，文章中的事情發(fā)生在過去，全文為一般過去時，所以buy的時態(tài)不對。故將buy改成bought。

第十處：考查介詞。句意：他會親自給自己的媽媽送花。根據(jù)句意這里要表達的是“親自送花”，in person為固定搭配，意為“親自地”符合句意，故將with改成in。

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