Question

15．近年來許多名校成為旅游景點，這引起了廣泛的公眾關(guān)注．為此你班展開有關(guān)"Should university campuses be open to tourists？"的討論．請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給China Daily報社寫一封信，介紹討論情況并發(fā)表白己的看法．

反對者	影響在校學習的學生，分散其注意力；大量游客涌入校園，會帶來安全隱患．
贊成者	拉近學生和社會距離，利于文化交流；一些大學已成為社會文明的象征，應該讓人們?nèi)ジ惺苣抢锏臍夥眨?/TD>
你的建議/看法	…（至少談兩點）

注意：1．詞數(shù)：150左右．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計人總詞數(shù)；
2．短文須包括表中的全部內(nèi)容，可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Editor，
Recent years have witnessed the fact that campuses of famous universities have become one of the popular tourist destinations，which has aroused great public concern．
                                                           
Best regards，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息討論"Should university campuses be open to tourists？"寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從反對者和贊成者及個人觀點三個方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether the university campus should be open to tourists．（高分句型）
Worse still，with so many tourists entering the campuses，some safety problems will probably arise．（高分句型）
They insist that this can bring students and society closer together and is good for cultural exchange between people．（高分句型）Besides，some universities have become a symbol of social civilization and people should be allowed a chance to experience the atmosphere．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Editor，
     Recent years have witnessed the fact that campuses of famous universities have become one of the popular tourist destinations，which has aroused great public concern． I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether the university campus should be open to tourists．（高分句型）
    Some students argue that tourists should be denied access to university campuses．They think the tourists visiting the campuses will make it harder for students to focus on their studies．Worse still，with so many tourists entering the campuses，some safety problems will probably arise．（高分句型）
    However，others hold opposite opinions．They insist that this can bring students and society closer together and is good for cultural exchange between people．（高分句型）Besides，some universities have become a symbol of social civilization and people should be allowed a chance to experience the atmosphere．（高分句型）
    In my opinion，several factors should be considered before opening university campuses to tourists．First，campuses should only be open to tourists on weekends or during holidays．Second，the number of tourists should be strictly limited to guarantee safety．（150 words）
                                                      Best regards，
                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．