Question

1．畢業(yè)季也是感恩季，來(lái)自澳大利亞的Feinstein在她的網(wǎng)站上發(fā)起感謝信接力的活動(dòng)．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封感謝信參加接力，內(nèi)容包括：
1．感謝的人或事物；
2．感謝的原因；
3．你的美好愿望．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右 字．2．不得透露個(gè)人信息及感謝人信息
DearSamantha，
I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher．From day one，I enjoyed each and every class of yours．（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．Every day I looked forward to your class，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English．（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．I enjoyed everything you taught us，from the English language to American culture．The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds，and it simply makes my mouth water．
（高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．You are a great inspiration to us all!
A big and warm"Thank you!"from your beloved student!May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封感謝信參加接力，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、感謝的人或事物；感謝的原因；你的美好愿望．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)，就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)并結(jié)合部分一般過(guò)去時(shí)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．
該句型使用了make+賓語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)，informative，educational and enjoyable 三個(gè)形容詞做賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)；
（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．
  該句使用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句It was you who…強(qiáng)調(diào)主語(yǔ)you；
（高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．
該句式使用了whom引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，whom充當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)；
高級(jí)詞匯：informative，educational and enjoyable 有信息的、教育的、有樂(lè)趣的；awaken喚醒；inspire激勵(lì)；

解答 Dear Samantha，
      I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher．From day one，I enjoyed each and every class of yours．（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．Every day I looked forward to your class，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English．（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．I enjoyed everything you taught us，from the English language to American culture．The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds，and it simply makes my mouth water．（高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．You are a great inspiration to us all!
      A big and warm"Thank you!"from your beloved student!May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．