Question

18．假如你是李明，在學(xué)校發(fā)現(xiàn)許多不文明行為，如隨地吐痰、亂涂亂畫、亂丟垃圾等，請你給學(xué)校文學(xué)社寫一封信，呼吁同學(xué)們提高素質(zhì)、創(chuàng)建美麗校園．
內(nèi)容要點：
1．你所看到的不文明行為及危害；
2．為建設(shè)美麗校園，提出你的倡議（至少兩點）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100～120；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
3．不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名．
參考詞匯：吐痰spit； 刻畫 scratch； 不文明行為immoral behaviors
Dear editor，
I am writing to tell you about what I saw while studying in the school．
                                           
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 假如你是李明，在學(xué)校發(fā)現(xiàn)許多不文明行為，如隨地吐痰、亂涂亂畫、亂丟垃圾等，請你給學(xué)校文學(xué)社寫一封信，呼吁同學(xué)們提高素質(zhì)、創(chuàng)建美麗校園．內(nèi)容要點：1．你所看到的不文明行為及危害；2．為建設(shè)美麗中國，提出你的倡議（至少兩點）．3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．4．不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名．寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩．
【亮點說明】I was surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public places．運用固定句式；Some people spit at will wherever they went； some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots，which did great damage to them．運用定語從句；In my opinion，it's high time we should take action to help improve the situation．運用定語從句；Last but not least，we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did．運用賓語從句；Second，our media should also take responsibility to guide people to protect the environment．此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次．
Some people spit at will wherever they went； some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots，which did great damage to them．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，it's high time we should take action to help improve the situation．（高分句型二）
Last but not least，we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did．（高分句型三）
Only by working together can we make our country become more and more beautiful!（高分句型四）

解答 Dear editor，
       I am writing to tell you about what I saw while traveling during this winter vacation．
       I was surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public places．Some people spit at will wherever they went； some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots，which did great damage to them．（高分句型一）
       In my opinion，it's high time we should take action to help improve the situation．（高分句型二）First，certain laws should be passed to ensure people won't damage the environment．Second，our media should also take responsibility to guide people to protect the environment．Last but not least，we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did．（高分句型三）
       Only by working together can we make our country become more and more beautiful!（高分句型四）
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．