Dear Advice Girl, I have just moved from California to Ohio.At my new school,there are so many groups like those I see in movies,but there's no one like the people I used to be with.How can I fit in(融入) or at least make some friends? Erica |
分析 本文是要寫一封回信.完成本文的寫作,可分以下三步走:
一、審題.可從體裁、內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)三方面進(jìn)行審題,同時有必要明確統(tǒng)籌全篇的主要時態(tài).
1、體裁.寫作要求是根據(jù)來信寫一封回信,所以其體裁是書信,在就要求我們首先有熟悉書信的基本格式;
2、內(nèi)容.回信的特點就是根據(jù)來函內(nèi)容作出必要的答復(fù);
3、結(jié)構(gòu).一般說來,中學(xué)英語寫作多采用兩段或三段式(再多了就顯得繁復(fù)雜亂),后者多用于議論文等體裁.另外,整篇文章在邏輯(不是形式)關(guān)系上,要始終注意保持時態(tài)一致.
二、構(gòu)思.根據(jù)上面的審題,可先大致勾勒出文章中的主要句子,明確需要用到的主要詞語和表達(dá).
三、寫作.用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞和關(guān)聯(lián)詞語,將上述主要內(nèi)容和句子連接起來,便成了一篇比較令人滿意的回信和優(yōu)秀的書面表達(dá)
That's because we are all new here and our classmates are not quite familiar with each other.(高分句式一 )
With time going on,I'm sure we'll know you better and like to make friends with you.( 高分句式二)
解答 Dear Erica,
I am sorry to learn that you have problems in your new school.I know you are now having trouble communicating with others,and you may often feel lonely.That's because we are all new here and our classmates are not quite familiar with each other.(高分句式一 )But I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.(對現(xiàn)在的處境表示同情)
First,you should take an active part in the discussions and freely voice your own opinions.At the same time,learn to listen to others'views.Second,you should learn about our classmates'likes and dislikes.Gradually you can find something in common with us.In this way,you can get to know more about different people around you.(提出解決的辦法)
Above all,do remember that participating in associations with others together makes you share something with them.With time going on,I'm sure we'll know you better and like to make friends with you.( 高分句式二)
Best wishes.
Love,
The Advice Girl.
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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