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11．假定你是李華，你的一位美國(guó)朋友Jane在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國(guó)．現(xiàn)在由你給她發(fā)E-mail，邀請(qǐng)她參加為她舉辦的歡送會(huì)，要點(diǎn)如下：
（1）祝賀她順利通過(guò)考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲；
（2）感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)；
（3）時(shí)間：星期六晚六點(diǎn)；
（4）地點(diǎn)：陽(yáng)光俱樂(lè)部（The Sun Club）302房間；
（5）路線：在Jane所住賓館門(mén)口乘坐332路公共汽車(chē)可直達(dá)．
注意：（1）須包括以上主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；
（2）詞數(shù)：100左右．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（3）參考詞匯：歡送會(huì) farewell party

Dear Jane，
Congratulations on your passing all the exams．I am delighted that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China．All you have gained is the result of your hard work．【高分句型】（祝賀她順利通過(guò)考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲）We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English．We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together．【高分句型】（感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)）
It's a pity that you have to go back soon!So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening．Could you come by 6：00 p．m．？（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）
We'll have dinner together．By the way，you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club．（路線）
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫(xiě)一封E-mail，邀請(qǐng)?jiān)谥袊?guó)學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年即將回國(guó)的美國(guó)朋友Jane參加為她舉辦的歡送會(huì)．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．祝賀她順利通過(guò)考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲；2．感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)；3．時(shí)間：星期六晚六點(diǎn)4．地點(diǎn)：陽(yáng)光俱樂(lè)部（The Sun Club）302房間．5．路線：在Jane所住賓館門(mén)口乘坐332路公共汽車(chē)可直達(dá)．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)以第一和第三人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：congratulations on sth（祝賀某人某事），make greatprogress （取得很大進(jìn)步），be proud of （對(duì)…自豪），appreciate one'shelp（感謝某人的幫助），go back （返回），hold afarewell party （舉行一個(gè)送別會(huì)），by the way （順便說(shuō)），in front of （在…前面），wish sb sth（祝愿某人…）．

【高分句型】
1．I am delighted that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China．
這里是由that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句作形容詞delighted的賓語(yǔ)．
2．All you have gained is the result of your hard work．
這里是由省略了關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是all，定語(yǔ)從句中缺少賓語(yǔ)．這個(gè)句子的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是is，主語(yǔ)為All you have gained，表語(yǔ)為the result of your hard work．
3．We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together．
這里是由省略了關(guān)系代詞that或which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為the wonderful time，定語(yǔ)從句中缺少賓語(yǔ)．

解答 Dear Jane，
 Congratulations on your passing all the exams．I am delighted that youhave really made great progress in your two years of studying in China．【高分句型】All you have gained is the result of your hard work．【高分句型】（祝賀她順利通過(guò)考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲） We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English．We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together．【高分句型】（感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)）
It's a pity that you have to go back soon!So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturdayevening．Could you come by 6：00 p．m．？（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）We'll have dinner together．By the way，you maytake Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club．（路線）
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully，

Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．