Question

去年暑假你們游覽了北京，下面是你們的行程，請(qǐng)就此寫一篇100詞左右的短文。
早上：和幾個(gè)朋友一起乘地鐵前往天安門廣場(chǎng)（Tiananmen Square）,觀看了升旗（flag-raising ceremony），照了許多照片；
中午：在前門大街（Qianmen Street）吃了北京特色小吃（Beijing specialty food）;
下午：參觀了自己夢(mèng)寐以求的北京大學(xué)，并和大學(xué)生們簡(jiǎn)單交流了一下；
晚上：乘公共汽車回賓館，途徑鳥(niǎo)巢（Bird’s Nest），夜晚的鳥(niǎo)巢美不勝收。

Answer 1

Last summer holiday, my friends and I visited the capital of China, Beijing. Early in the morning, we took the subway to head for Tiananmen Square, where we watched the flag-raising ceremony. We also took many photos on Tiananmen Square. After that, we went to Qianmen Street where we had Beijing specialty food for lunch at noon. In the afternoon, we toured around Beijing University, which I had been dreaming of . When walking on the campus, I took the opportunity to talk with some college students, from whom I learned a lot. In the evening, we took a bus to return to the hotel. On the way we passed the spectacular Bird’s Nest, whose beauty was beyond description at night.
What a memorable tour!

本文介紹了和朋友們游覽北京的行程。注意使用過(guò)去時(shí)，同時(shí)也要注意使用時(shí)間順序來(lái)連接全文，這樣可以讓文章更有條理，不凌亂。在寫作的過(guò)程中要使用高級(jí)的詞匯，如opportunity， ceremony等讓文章更有文采。