Question

【題目】

近期，某校組織高三學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一場討論。主題是:高三年級(jí)要不要集中進(jìn)行晚自習(xí)。根據(jù)下圖提供的信息，寫一篇英語短文，客觀地介紹一下討論的情況，注意要涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)。

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)不少于100(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

晚自習(xí)evening self-study

Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school. The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not. Here is the result according to the survey.

60 percent of the students think it’s a good idea to have the evening self-study at school. They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers. Also, they can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom and with company of their fellow classmates. There are 25 percent of the students who think they prefer to study at home. They suppose that they may get disturbed by others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone. At the same time, still 15 percent of the students don’t have a clear answer to the question. They say they will go to school to have evening self-study if they are asked to, but they promise they can also do well at home.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于看圖寫作，要求寫一封說明文。

根據(jù)提示可知，本篇書面表達(dá)屬于看圖寫作，要求寫一封說明文，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。關(guān)鍵要點(diǎn)如下：①討論：高三年級(jí)要不要集中進(jìn)行晚自習(xí)；②60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為要上自習(xí)及其理由；③25%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為不上自習(xí)及其理由；④15%無所謂。

第二步：根據(jù)關(guān)鍵要點(diǎn)，確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：evening self-study（晚自習(xí)），concentrate on their lessons（集中精力學(xué)習(xí)），get disturbed（被打擾）等。

第三步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題以及句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整。

第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，使之自然流暢，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面。