Question

7．閱讀下面圖表和文字，然后按照要求寫一篇150字左右的英語短文．
Brunswick，the international advisory firm，has just released their global survey of over 40，000 people from 26 countries that includes generations，geographies and measures global opinion on a large group of topics such as globalization and automation（自動化）．
      
Here are the 10 countries from the survey that were optimistic about the future．
10．Denmark：20%；
9．Finland：22%；
8．Singapore：24%；
7．Hong Kong，China：32%；
6．Brazil：34%；
5．Thailand：41%；
4．Indonesia：60%；
3．United Arab Emirates：63%；
2．India：73%；
1．Mainland China：74%．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．用大約30個(gè)單詞概況以上內(nèi)容；
2．用大約120個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：
1）你覺得中國人為什么對未來非常樂觀（至少兩個(gè)理由）？
2）具體在你個(gè)人生活中，該如何保持樂觀的心態(tài)？
【寫作要求】
1．發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)時(shí)必須提供理由或論據(jù)；
2．闡述觀點(diǎn)或敘述經(jīng)歷時(shí)，不能直接引用原文語句；
3．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
4．不必寫標(biāo)題．
The message I get from the passage is that about the future people from Mainland China are most optimistic，which，as a good quality，is greatly emphasized in the picture．
I don't think this result is surprising．In my opinion，Chinese people have at least two reasons to be optimistic．Firstly，China has a most dynamic economy and her people's living conditions are constantly being improved，which increases their faith in the future．Secondly，compared to many other countries and regions，China enjoys a peaceful and stable social environment，the positive effects of which can never be overestimated．．
As a Chinese student，I feel proud of my country．At the same time，I have great faith in her future，too．I think I will learn to be an optimistic person because whatever situation we happen to be in，only positive outlooks can bring us hope and courage to meet challenges one after another．（157）．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于圖表類作文，首要要看清圖表的內(nèi)容，尤其是數(shù)字的介紹從而得出用30個(gè)詞來概括的結(jié)論，在陳述自己觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，至少需要兩點(diǎn)理由來支持，作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
（高分句型一）China has a most dynamic economy and her people's living conditions are constantly being improved，which increases their faith in the future．
該句使用了 are constantly being improved現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)的被動語態(tài)；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；
（高分句型二）compared to many other countries and regions，China enjoys a peaceful and stable social environment，the positive effects of which can never be overestimated．．
該句compared to…是固定短語，與…做比較；the positive effects of which 是一個(gè)定語從句；
高級詞匯：emphasize強(qiáng)調(diào)；compared to…與…做比較；have great faith in 對…很有信心；
In my opinion、Firstly、Secondly、At the same time等過段詞銜接上下文．

解答 The message I get from the passage is that about the future people from Mainland China are most optimistic，which，as a good quality，is greatly emphasized in the picture．（30個(gè)詞對文章大意介紹）
    （表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)）I don't think this result is surprising．In my opinion，Chinese people have at least two reasons to be optimistic．Firstly，（高分句型一）China has a most dynamic economy and her people's living conditions are constantly being improved，which increases their faith in the future．Secondly，（高分句型二）compared to many other countries and regions，China enjoys a peaceful and stable social environment，the positive effects of which can never be overestimated．．
    As a Chinese student，I feel proud of my country．At the same time，I have great faith in her future，too．I think I will learn to be an optimistic person because whatever situation we happen to be in，only positive outlooks can bring us hope and courage to meet challenges one after another．（157）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧