Question

19．假如你是李華．隨著國(guó)外游客的不斷增多，你所在城市的公園管理處計(jì)劃在暑假招聘20名學(xué)生導(dǎo)游，你希望成為其中一員．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封求職信，要點(diǎn)如下：
（1）寫(xiě)信意圖．
（2）個(gè)人情況．
注意：（1）字?jǐn)?shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；
（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
My name  is Li Hua，
a 19-year-old-boy．I am writingtoapply for a studentguide in the summer vacation．
To begin with，as a senior high student，I'm used to practicing speaking English in everyday life．I often voice chat with some English net-pels in my spare time，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．So I can comunicate with foreigners without any difficulties．Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and very fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a good guide should have．Above all，as a native of the city，I know a lot about its history and culture．So I'm sure that the visiters will appreciate my work and enjoy their stay in our city．
If I am given the chance to be a guide，I'll spare no effort to do it well．In a word，I'm looking forward to it．
Thank you．
Yours faithfully
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封申請(qǐng)信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和第一人稱(chēng)．內(nèi)容包括：一表明寫(xiě)信意圖；二介紹個(gè)人情況；三表達(dá)期望．
高分句型：
1．I often voice chat with some English net-pels in my spare time，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English句子里which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句提到的這件事；contributes to 表示"導(dǎo)致，有助于"．
在空閑時(shí)間我經(jīng)常和筆友聊天，這就使得我的英文口語(yǔ)很流利．
2．Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and very fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a good guide should have句子里fond of 表示"喜歡"；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句I'm open-minded，quick in thought and very fond of social practice提到的這件事；that 引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞  a quality，做定語(yǔ)從句的賓語(yǔ)，可以省略．

解答 My name is Li Hua，a 19-year-old-boy．I am writing to apply for a student guide in the summer vacation．（表明寫(xiě)信意圖）
To begin with，as a senior high student，I'm used to practicing speaking English in everyday life．I often voice chat with some English net-pels in my spare time，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．【高分句型一】So I can comunicate with foreigners without any difficulties．Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and very fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a good guide should have．【高分句型二】Above all，as a native of the city，I know a lot about its history and culture．So I'm sure that the visiters will appreciate my work and enjoy their stay in our city．（介紹個(gè)人情況）
If I am given the chance to be a guide，I'll spare no effort to do it well．In a word，I'm looking forward to it．（表達(dá)期望）
Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類(lèi)作文．
書(shū)面表達(dá)中的寫(xiě)信類(lèi)作文，我們首先要完整的正確的表達(dá)出所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)．在寫(xiě)作中，如果語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)好的話(huà)，多用較高級(jí)語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，這樣可以使文章增色不少．同時(shí)要合理的使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，這樣文章才能結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，渾然一體．