Question

2．假如你是李華．請你給校報編輯寫一封建議信．內(nèi)容如下：
1．春節(jié)是中國最重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日．在七天的假期中，親朋好友喜歡歡聚一堂，吃吃喝喝，開心地玩樂．
2．問題：有些人過度飲食，增重不少；有些人整日整夜玩游戲、玩紙牌．
3．建議：保持平衡的飲食，有益于健康；選擇戶外運(yùn)動或全家旅游，過一個健康有意義的春節(jié)．
Dear editor，
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China．
         ．
Your sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型
句型一：
people should keep a balanced diet and try to avoid rich food and overeating during the festival，which is of great benefit to their health．使用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，表示"人們應(yīng)該保持飲食平衡，避免油膩食物和暴飲暴食，這對他們的健康有好處．"
句型二：
Why not go out with the families and friends，such as，taking a walk in the mountains，to breathe fresh air and admire the scenery as well？為什么不和家人朋友出去呢？例如：在山中散步，去呼吸新鮮空氣和欣賞風(fēng)景？why not do…為什么不做…

解答 Dear editor，
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China．During the seven-day holiday，all the families and friends love to get together to eat，drink and have fun with each other．（要點(diǎn)一）
But at the same time，some people will eat and drink too much．It's easy for them to put on weight．Some people spend most of the time sitting still，playing games and card games day and night．（要點(diǎn)二）
To have a healthy and meaningful Festival，I suggest that，for one thing，people should keep a balanced diet and try to avoid rich food and overeating during the festival，which is of great benefit to their health．【高分句型一】Why not go out with the families and friends，such as，taking a walk in the mountains，to breathe fresh air and admire the scenery as well？【高分句型二】Doing outdoor activities is a good way to help you relax both mentally and physically．I bet that people will get refreshment afterwards．There are many other choices，too．Family tour is the one if you like．（要點(diǎn)三）
I hope you find my advice useful and have a happy，healthy and meaningful Spring Festival
                                                                  Your sincerely，
                                                                   Li Hua

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