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中國(guó)“虎媽”蔡美兒以其給兩個(gè)女兒列出絕對(duì)不允許做的“十不準(zhǔn)”在全球一炮走紅。由此而引發(fā)的有關(guān)如何教育子女的爭(zhēng)論愈演愈烈。請(qǐng)就此給China Daily投稿，闡明家長(zhǎng)們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并發(fā)表自己的見解。

一些家長(zhǎng)的觀點(diǎn)	子女必須沿著父母為其選擇的道路努力…... 必要時(shí)采用高壓手段…...
另一些家長(zhǎng)的觀點(diǎn)	孩子應(yīng)該自由發(fā)展…... 賞識(shí)教育，好孩子是夸出來(lái)的…...
你的觀點(diǎn)	......(至少兩點(diǎn))

注意：1. 對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。
2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
Amy Chua, a professor at Yale Law School, who listed ten “Don’ts” to her two daughters became famous overnight. She insists that parents should be very strict with their children. It has caused a heated online debate...                              
                                                                     
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                     

Answer 1

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Amy Chua, a professor at Yale Law School, who listed ten “Don’ts” to her two daughters became famous overnight. She insists that parents should be very strict with their children. It has caused a heated online debate.
Some parents insist that children should make every effort to live up to their parents’ expectations. They believe it is necessary to be strict with their children. They say parents who set high standards and push their kids to study and make achievements can ensure their children’s success in the future competition.
Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that children should have the right to make their own decisions and develop in their own way. Additionally, praise the children when they do well and encourage them when they are faced with challenges, and they will be great.
In my opinion, those who are raised with the strict Chinese parenting style don’t have the ability to think and act independently. They lack imagination, creativity and social skills. Parents should not put so much pressure on the children. Just give them suggestions and show respect to their own choices so that they will learn to be independent.

解析試題分析：該題型一般要求在表述他人對(duì)某個(gè)問題或某件事的不同評(píng)論的同時(shí)表明自己的觀點(diǎn)或態(tài)度。人們常用的寫作格式是:提出問題→兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)→對(duì)兩種不同觀點(diǎn)的論據(jù)(理由)逐項(xiàng)作對(duì)比,最后寫作者本人的觀點(diǎn)。
考點(diǎn)：這是提綱作文。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)�？忌�注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來(lái)使文章讀起來(lái)比較流暢。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作練習(xí)以外，還可以適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。