Question

9．生活中處處充滿陽光，每個人都會得到同學的幫助、朋友的支持、老師的關心和親人的愛護，讓你感受到生活中的陽光和幸福．請寫一件你經(jīng)歷過的事，說明生活是美好的．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120左右；
2．語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
Some say life is happy，but others feel life is unhappy．In my opinion，life is beautiful and full of sunshine．
有人說，生活是快樂的，但是其他人覺得生活是不快樂的．在我看來，生命是美麗而充滿陽光．
高分句型二：
Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky，but we should believe life is beautiful．Help and love will be around us forever．
也許有時我們會感到不幸，但我們應該相信生活是美好的．幫助和愛永遠在我們身邊．

解答 Sunshine in My Life
Everyone has different ideas about life．Some say life is happy，but others feel life is unhappy．In my opinion，life is beautiful and full of sunshine（高分句型一）．
Several weeks ago，one of my classmates Sun was badly ill．He had to be in hospital for a long time．But his family was too poor to afford it．What could we do？We decided to raise money for him．Everyone in our class took out our pocket money．Then，we went to the street on Sunday to collect money from others．When we sent all the money to him，he and his parents were deeply moved．
Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky，but we should believe life is beautiful．Help and love will be around us forever（高分句型二）．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．