請以下列詞語為關(guān)鍵詞寫一篇短文:

shy change dare overcome

內(nèi)容:

1. 自己或他人的一次經(jīng)歷;

2. 你的感受。

注意:

1. 必須使用所給四個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞;

2. 詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè);

3. 不能使用真實(shí)姓名或?qū)W校名稱;

4. 開頭已給出。

I used to be a shy girl and was afraid to speak before others,

I used to be a shy girl and was afraid to speak before others, but now I can make a speech in public. It was an activity that make me change so much. Last year I took part in a summer camp in which teachers taught me how to challenge ourselves and become independent. We were divided into groups and given difficult tasks. We must communicate with each other and express our opinions in order to complete the tasks. In the end, we succeeded in finishing the tasks. On the last day, all of us were given a chance to express ourselves in front of others. I didn’t dare to do it before, but that day I made it.

Everyone has shortcomings, but as long as you overcome them, you can make progress and achieve your goals.

【解析】

試題分析:題目要求根據(jù)所給詞語用英語寫一篇短文。寫作要點(diǎn)包括:自己或他人的一次經(jīng)歷;自己的感受兩個(gè)方面。必須使用給出的四個(gè)詞匯,作文詞數(shù)不少于120詞;不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名或校名;開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯(cuò)誤,盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀;注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說明:范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點(diǎn),進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣,并注意語句的連貫性;范文還使用了定語從句、條件狀語從句等語法知識,具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。

語法方面:定語從句①that make me change so much,②in which teachers taught me how to challenge ourselves;條件句as long as you overcome them等,語法知識運(yùn)用比較嫻熟,顯示了較強(qiáng)的語法功底,也使作文句式變得多樣;

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面:范文注意使用in the end, on the last day, but等來銜接句子和段落,使表達(dá)變得更有條理;

短語和搭配方面:范文使用了in public, take part in, divide...into, communicate with, in order to do, succeeded in doing, give sb a chance to do, in front of, dare to do, make it, make progress等短語和搭配,使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。

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