Question

11．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華．下面四幅圖描述了你們帶留學(xué)生Jack看中醫(yī)（TCM）的經(jīng)歷．請你根據(jù)圖片的先后順序，為�？�"英語角"寫一篇短文，介紹你們帶Jack看醫(yī)生前后的全過程．
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60．
提示詞：把脈 feel one's pulse

Answer 1

分析 寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
（高分句型一）It was in a math class that I noticed Jack coughing with a runny nose．Everyone looked at him with concern．
該句使用了It was in a math class that…強(qiáng)調(diào)句，強(qiáng)調(diào)狀語in a math class；
（高分句型二）Seeing this，one classmate and I offered to take him to the TCM department．
該句使用了現(xiàn)在分詞seeing做狀語，see和主句的主語one classmate and I是主動關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞；
高分句型三）I have every reason to believe that with more and more international communication，TCM will be accepted globally and benefit more people in the future．
該句使用了will be accepted的被動語態(tài)；

解答 Last month，we took Jack，an American exchange student who fell ill to a traditional Chinese doctor，which turned out to be an eye-widening experience for him．
     （高分句型一）It was in a math class that I noticed Jack coughing with a runny nose．Everyone looked at him with concern．（高分句型二）Seeing this，one classmate and I offered to take him to the TCM department．He hesitated but followed．At the clinic，the doctor first looked at Jack for a while before feeling his pulse and checking his tongue．The doctor then asked if the cough had been on and off for a long time．In great surprise，Jack nodded his head．The doctor then wrote a prescription with instructions on how to take the medicine．
     After boiling the herb medicine at home，I brought it to him in his dormitory．The first taste almost made him throw up．It was really too hard even for me．I comforted him with an old saying"Good medicine to the health tastes bitter to the mouth"．Jack managed to swallow the medicine with a frown．But after a week，when he recovered，he felt amazed at the effect of the Chinese medicine．At a class meeting about the deepest impressions about China，Jack chose"TCM in My Eyes"as the topic．He shared his experience of TCM，from doubt at first to belief in the end．
     We all felt inspired and proud hearing a foreigner introducing the profound TCM．（高分句型三）I have every reason to believe that with more and more international communication，TCM will be accepted globally and benefit more people in the future．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．