Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions as a secretary of English. Here I would like to introduce me briefly. I am a 25-year-old young man graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University. I have been a English guide for two years after graduation. As a result, my oral English is pretty well. I think the job is suitable for me. I had much confidence of myself. If I am given to the job, I promise I will do my best to do it well. I’d like to meet you at your convenient to discuss the possibility of working in your company. An early reply to my application will be high appreciated.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】positions →position

【2】me →myself

【3】graduated →graduating或者前面加who/that

【4】a →an

【5】well →good

【6】confidence of →confidence in

【7】had →have

【8】given to →given

【9】convenient →convenience

【10】high →highly

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于一則求職信息，文中介紹了自己的相關(guān)情況，以及渴望得到這一職位。

【1】positions →position 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。此處提到的是作為英文秘書這一職位，應(yīng)為單數(shù)形式。

【2】me →myself 考查反身代詞，根據(jù)句意此處應(yīng)為介紹本人自己，故將me 改為myself。

【3】graduated →graduating或者前面加who/that 考查句型。本句中I am a 25-year-old young man為完整的一句話后面動(dòng)詞可以用非謂語形式并且與邏輯主語為主動(dòng)關(guān)系將graduated 改為graduating或者是在graduated前面加上引導(dǎo)詞who/that構(gòu)成從句。

【4】a →an考查不定冠詞。不定冠詞后面詞中為元音音素開頭用an本句中English符合本條件故將a改為an。

【5】well →good 考查固定搭配。Pretty good 相當(dāng)好，另外句子為主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，由形容詞作表語，故將well改為good。

【6】 confidence of →confidence in 考查固定搭配。Have confidence in對(duì)……有信心，句意：我對(duì)我自己有信心。

【7】had →have 考查時(shí)態(tài)。整篇文章為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故將had改為have。

【8】given to →given考查被動(dòng)語態(tài)。被動(dòng)語態(tài)中將介詞省略。

【9】convenient →convenience 考查固定搭配。At one’s convenience 在某人方便時(shí)。

【10】high →highly 考查句子搭配。動(dòng)詞highly修飾動(dòng)詞appreciated。句意：早日回復(fù)我的申請(qǐng)將被非常感激。