【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（/\)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（一），并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

During the last summer holiday, my parents and I paid visit to my grandparents by train. There was a large number of people and the train was crowded, but everyone helped those who had lots of baggages and behaved politely. Along the way, we chatted happily and enjoyed beautifully views. At first, we saw one hill after other. Then which came into view were fields with green crops. In a six-hour trip, we arrived at my grandparents’house. Tired as I felt, but I was happy to see my grandparents，whom I haven't seen for a long time. It was really an excited trip because it was the first time that I had taken such a long-distance train.

【答案】

【1】pay后面加a

【2】was→were

【3】baggages→baggage

【4】beautifully→beautiful

【5】other→another

【6】which→what

【7】In→After

【8】去掉but

【9】haven't→ hadn't

【10】excited→ exciting

【解析】

【1】pay后面加a 考查固定短語(yǔ)。Pay a visit to 拜訪；

【2】was→were 考查主謂一致。主語(yǔ)是a large number of people，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式；

【3】baggages→baggage 考查名詞。Baggage是不可數(shù)名詞；

【4】beautifully→beautiful 考查形容詞。形容詞用來(lái)修飾名詞views.

【5】other→another 考查代詞。One after anther 一個(gè)接一個(gè)；

【6】which→what 考查主語(yǔ)從句。句意：進(jìn)入視野的是綠色的莊稼；

【7】In→After 考查介詞 。句意：六個(gè)小時(shí)的旅行之后，我們到達(dá) 了外婆家；

【8】去掉but 考查連詞。As在句子已經(jīng)表示雖然，英語(yǔ)中沒(méi)有but；

【9】haven't→ hadn't 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)I was happy to see my grandparents可知發(fā)生在過(guò)去，沒(méi)有見(jiàn)面這個(gè)動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過(guò)去的過(guò)去，用過(guò)去完成時(shí)；

【10】excited→ exciting 考查形容詞。Excited 用來(lái)修飾人，exciting用來(lái)修飾物；

考點(diǎn) ：短文改錯(cuò)。

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