廈門方特夢幻王國(Xiamen Fangte Magic Kingdom)是我國新建的一座大型主題公園。假設你叫張娟,請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給外國朋友凱特寫一封郵件,介紹這一主題公園,并邀請她暑假一起到那里游玩。

[ 寫作內(nèi)容 ]

位置

美麗的海濱城市廈門

開放時間

2013年4月28日

面積

約240公頃

特色

以科幻和互動體驗而出名,將高科技與中國傳統(tǒng)文化相融合,創(chuàng)造出一個充滿

幻想和刺激的神奇天地

主要活動

精彩表演、多種娛樂活動

[ 參考詞匯 ]

公頃 hectare 科幻 science fiction 互動interaction 高科技 high-tech

[寫作要求]

1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總句數(shù);

2.必須用5個句子表達全部所給的內(nèi)容;

3.將5個句子組織成連貫的短文。

[評分標準]

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Dear Kate ,

I’m very glad to have a chance to introduce a wonderful theme park to you

 

 

 

 

Why not come to visit it with me this summer holiday? I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Zhang Juan

 

Dear Kate,

I’m very glad to have a chance to introduce a wonderful theme park to you.

Xiamen Fangte Magic Kingdom, which lies in Xiamen, a beautiful city by the sea, is a newly-built theme park. The kingdom, opened on April 28, 2013, covers an area of nearly 240 hectares. The theme park is famous for science fiction and interaction experience. What’s more, by combining high-tech with traditional Chinese culture, the kingdom creates a magic world full of fantasies and excitement. You can take part in a variety of entertainments and enjoy performances there.

Why not come to visit it with me this summer holiday? I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Zhang Juan

【解析】

試題分析:寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱,因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示,認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系,然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱,列出要點,并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力,靈活運用英語知識,采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來,注意主次分明,詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展,按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性?忌仨氄J真查驗是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】范文很好的表達了要點的內(nèi)容,使用了一些很好的詞組和句型:be famous for 因為…而著名,combine… with…將…和…結(jié)合起來, take part in 參加,a variety of各種各樣的, looking forward to 盼望,Xiamen Fangte Magic Kingdom, which lies in Xiamen, a beautiful city by the sea, is a newly-built theme park. 這句話使用了非限制性定語從句,The kingdom, opened on April 28, 2013, covers an area of nearly 240 hectares. 這句話使用了過去分詞做定語,還有范文使用了What’s more這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。

考點:考查提綱類書面表達

 

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