Question

【題目】假定你是李華，寒假期間在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館2月16號要舉辦中國畫展覽。請用英語給你的英國朋友Jeff 寫一封信邀請他和你一同前往。內(nèi)容包括：

1.展覽時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；

2.展覽內(nèi)容；

3.期待回復(fù)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jeff,

How are you doing? Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.

As scheduled, the exhibition will be held at the local art gallery on February 16. A variety of traditional Chinese paintings by famous Chinese artists will be on display. If interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot. I’m sure the visit will not only broaden our horizons but also help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.

Would you like to go to the exhibition together with me? I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.

Yours ,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封邀請信。

第一步：

審題：邀請信 邀請Jeff參加中國畫展覽

人稱：第一、二和三人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分邀請Jeff參加中國畫展覽，第二部分說明展覽的具體安排和內(nèi)容，第三部分期待他的回復(fù)。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 邀請Jeff參加中國畫展覽

2．展覽的具體安排

①展覽時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：2月16 日，當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館

②展覽內(nèi)容：中國著名藝術(shù)家創(chuàng)作的傳統(tǒng)中國畫

3．期待他的回復(fù)

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語）

be crazy about；delighted；invite sb. to do…；attend a Chinese painting exhibition；hold；

the local art gallery；on February 16；on display；have a chance to do…；under the guidance of；broaden one’s horizons；have a better understanding of

第三步：連詞成句

(1)I know that you are crazy about Chinese culture.

(2) I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.

(3) The exhibition will be held at the local art gallery on February 16.

(4)A variety of traditional Chinese paintings by famous Chinese artists will be on display.

(5) If you are interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot.

(6) The visit will broaden our horizons.

(7 ) It will help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.

(8) Would you like to go to the exhibition together with me?

(9) I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點(diǎn)詞匯)

將第一個(gè)句子用分詞作狀語，連接下面兩個(gè)句子

(1)I know that you are crazy about Chinese culture.

(2) I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.

→Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.

用狀語從句的省略形式改寫下面的句子

(5)If you are interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot.

→If interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot.

用not only… but also 連接下面的句子

(6) The visit will broaden our horizons .

(7 )It will help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.

→The visit will not only broaden our horizons but also help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.

適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用高級詞匯、復(fù)雜句式提升文章的檔次，增加文章的可讀性。