【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Two years ago, my class went on a five-day school trip in Paris! There was thirty of us and four teachers. We both went in one big and comfort coach. We watched a video and listened some CDs on the journey. It takes us only three hours to reach Paris. The hotel was very old, and the rooms were nice and the beds were great! When we went shopping, I tried to practise the French. We visited art galleries and I took lots of photo. The river trip was which I enjoyed most. Leave Paris made me sad as I had a lovely time there.

【答案】1. was→were 2. both→all 3.comfort →comfortable 4.listened后加to

5.takes→took 6.and→but 7.去掉the 8.photo→photos 9.which→what 10. Leave→Leaving

【解析】

本文是記敘文。文章講述了作者和全班同學(xué)兩年前的一次巴黎之行。

1.考查主謂一致。在there be句型中，be動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)遵循就近原則，此處是根據(jù)主語(yǔ)thirty of us and four teachers變化，be動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故was改為were。

2.考查代詞。both指兩者“都”；句中we指代上一句中的thirty of us and four teachers，指多者，應(yīng)用all，表示三者或三者以上“都”。故both改為all。

3.考查形容詞。and是并列連詞，連接兩個(gè)并列的成分；前面big是形容詞，comfort也應(yīng)用形容詞形式，修飾coach。故comfort改為comfortable。

4.考查固定短語(yǔ)。短語(yǔ)listen to“聽(tīng)”。故listened后加to。

5.考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)Two years ago, 文章敘述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，全文用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，因此takes也用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；take是不規(guī)則變化動(dòng)詞，過(guò)去式為took。故takes改為took。

6.考查連詞。前一句說(shuō)“旅館很舊”，后一句說(shuō)“房間很好”，兩個(gè)句子之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，and表示并列關(guān)系，應(yīng)用but表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故and改為but。

7.考查冠詞。French是語(yǔ)言，表示語(yǔ)言的名詞前用零冠詞。故去掉the。

8.考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。photo是可數(shù)名詞，前面有lots of 修飾，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。故photo改為photos。

9.考查表語(yǔ)從句。句意：河上之行是我最喜歡的。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，which I enjoyed most是表語(yǔ)從句，從句中I enjoyed后缺少賓語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用what引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句，在從句中作賓語(yǔ)，意思為“……事情”。故which改為what。

10.考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，Leave Paris在句中作主語(yǔ)，應(yīng)該動(dòng)名詞形式。故Leave改為Leaving。

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