Question

2．（Where should I insert the pencil？）

電腦給我們帶來方便同時(shí)也讓我們失去了很多．假如你們學(xué)校正在開展主題為"What are we losing in computer era？"的英文征文活動(dòng)，請你根據(jù)漫畫提示，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際生活，寫一篇120-150的短文．

Answer 1

分析 本書面表達(dá)是一篇圖畫類的寫作，仔細(xì)觀察分析圖畫的畫面，發(fā)現(xiàn)是電腦的使用替代了鉛筆而導(dǎo)致了書寫能力的退化．而本篇作文主題是結(jié)合圖片討論電腦讓我們失去了什么．考生寫作時(shí)注意句子的銜接，適當(dāng)使用連詞．同時(shí)還要注意的是在寫作過程中所運(yùn)用的時(shí)態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．除此以外，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語：
 on earth，究竟，plays an important role 扮演重要的角色，turn to sb．for help，向某人尋求幫助，rather than，而不是
高分句子：
On the other hand，however，some of ourselves，especially teenagers，who are addicted to games day and night．本句中含有who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，修飾teenagers．

解答 Today，the world becomes more intellective with the technology of we human beings．So the computers are made．But whether they are good or not on earth，we can't define definitely．（提出話題）
    The computer，in my opinion，I think it plays an important role in our life．we use everyday，we turn to it for help everyday，we have already not been able to be away from them．
On the other hand，however，some of ourselves，especially teenagers，who are addicted to games day and night．（ 高分句型）So much so that，they come to a point of commiting an offense only because they want to play computer games．we  really  should care for and persuade them．（自己看法）Take the picture for example，our later generations wouldn't recogize the pencil for people use computer to write．（描述圖畫）
    In the end，I want to say，computer is good or bad．The key is that how we use it rather than only saying the surface．（總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 看圖作文要求將畫面所包含的有效信息用文字表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．