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4．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I'll never forget the story which happen on a bus the other day．It was a wind day．I got on the bus after school．A young lady was standing next to me．In a flash，a strong wind blew through the window．A lady's false hair was blown away．To our surprises，she was hairless．While she was wondering what to do it，many passengers laughed loudly．So she managed to hold back her tears．Saw this，I picked up her false hair and said，"Don't sad，Miss．I'm sure your hair will grow soon．"When I glanced to other passengers，they all quick nodded their heads with shame．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中講述了在公交車(chē)上看到的一幕．一位年輕女士坐在作者旁邊，一陣大風(fēng)吹進(jìn)車(chē)窗把那位女女士的假發(fā)吹掉了，很多乘客都大笑起來(lái)，這位女士強(qiáng)忍住淚水，看到這作者幫她撿起假發(fā)，說(shuō)"我確信你的頭發(fā)很快就會(huì)長(zhǎng)出來(lái)的"，其他乘客聽(tīng)了都羞愧地低下了頭．

解答 I'll never forget the story which happen on a bus the other day．It was a wind day．I got on the bus after school．A young lady was standing next to me．In a flash，a strong wind blew through the window．A lady's false hair was blown away．To our surprises，she was hairless．While she was wondering what to do it，many passengers laughed loudly．So she managed to hold back her tears．Saw this，I picked up her false hair and said，"Don't∧sad，Miss．I'm sure your hair will grow soon．"When I glanced to other passengers，they all quick nodded their heads with shame．
詳解：
1．happen改為happened；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，本文講的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)．
2．wind改為windy；考查形容詞，此處用形容詞作定語(yǔ)修飾名詞day．
3．the改為a；考查冠詞，此處用不定冠詞a泛指"一輛公共汽車(chē)"．
4．window改為Windows；考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，window是可數(shù)名詞，結(jié)合句意"一陣大風(fēng)吹進(jìn)車(chē)窗"不可能是一個(gè)窗戶，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
5．A改為T(mén)he；考查冠詞，此處指的是上文提到的A young lady，故用定冠詞the表示特指．
6．surprises改為surprise考查名詞，to one's surprise為固定結(jié)構(gòu)，意為"使某人吃驚的是"．
7．去掉it；考查名詞性從句，what to do 是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，疑問(wèn)代詞what在從句中作動(dòng)詞do的賓語(yǔ)，it多余，故去掉．
8．Saw改為Seeing；考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，主語(yǔ)I與動(dòng)詞see存在邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)Seeing this作狀語(yǔ)．
9．sad前面加be；考查系表結(jié)構(gòu)，此處在助動(dòng)詞don't后面加上系動(dòng)詞be，與后面的形容詞sad構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
10．quick改為quickly；考查副詞，此處用副詞作狀語(yǔ)，修飾動(dòng)詞nodded．

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