3．假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
   增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)∧，并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
   刪除：把多余的詞用斜線\劃掉．
   修改：在錯(cuò)詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
    注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
         One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent．It was very crowded．Tony saw a toy on a shop window．He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop．After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing．Tony was scared and begun to cry．A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop．Five minutes later．Tony saw parents．Mom said，"How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried．"Tony promised her that this would never happen again．

分析 本文主要講述Tony和父母一起到商店購(gòu)物，與父母走失了，后在一位婦女的指導(dǎo)下，看到了他的父母．

解答 One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent．It was very crowded．Tony saw a toy on a shop window．He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop．After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing．Tony was scared and begun to cry．A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop．Five minutes later．Tony saw∧parents．Mom said，"How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried．"Tony promised her that this would never happen again．
詳解：
1．parent改為parents 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．結(jié)合下文的"his parents were missing"可知托尼是和爸爸媽媽一起去購(gòu)物的，因此應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式parents．
2．on改為in 考查介詞．結(jié)合生活常識(shí)可知，這里表示在商店櫥窗里擺放著一個(gè)玩具，故應(yīng)用in．
3．去掉very 考查固定搭配．so…that…意為"如此/這么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副詞，常常用來(lái)修飾形容詞或副詞，常用句型為：主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+so+adj．/adv．+that從句．
4．looks改為looking 考查動(dòng)名詞．介詞after后接動(dòng)詞時(shí)要用動(dòng)名詞形式．
5．where改為that或者去掉where 考查連詞．本句中連詞that引導(dǎo)的從句充當(dāng)動(dòng)詞found的賓語(yǔ)，that不作句子成分只起連接作用，同時(shí)賓語(yǔ)從句又可以省略掉連詞that．而where引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，在從句中作地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)，有"在哪里"的意思．
6．begun改為began 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．這里是對(duì)過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情的客觀敘述，應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)．
7．telling改為told 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．a(chǎn)nd后tell和saw一起做并列謂語(yǔ)，而并非和crying并列做賓補(bǔ)．
8．a(chǎn)改為the 考查冠詞．同一名詞第二次提到應(yīng)表示特指用定冠詞．
9．加his 考查代詞．此處parents并不是表示泛指而是指托尼的爸爸媽媽?zhuān)~parents前缺少限定詞．
10．terrible改為terribly 考查副詞．修飾形容詞worried應(yīng)用副詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書(shū)信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類(lèi)似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺(jué)是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

練習(xí)冊(cè)系列答案
相關(guān)習(xí)題

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：完形填空

10．In Britain，you must be （50）Aabout your mobile phone manners．It is not polite to answer your mobile phone if you are already（51）Dother people．If you are in a （52）Bplace like a library，your phone should be turned off or turned to silent．If you are making （53）A，people can get very unhappy．
By （54）C，British people are good at complaining about things to each other，but they are not good at telling the people in charge．（55）C，someone in a restaurant orders a （56）Dmeal but it is brought to them cold．They may complain to the people they are eating with，but traditionally will not let the waiter （57）B．They may even tell him（58）Dis fine and that the food is lovely!Today，British people are getting better at（59）Cwhen they need to，but some people still think it is（60）Cto complain about something in public．
50．A．carefulB．certainC．madD．nervous
51．A．looking atB．playing withC．learning aboutD．talking to
52．A．pleasantB．quietC．newD．special
53．A．noisesB．facesC．changesD．jokes
54．A．chanceB．lawC．traditionD．comparison
55．A．Above allB．As usualC．For exampleD．In short
56．A．fineB．freeC．simpleD．hot
57．A．worryB．knowC．a(chǎn)skD．guess
58．A．someoneB．a(chǎn)nyoneC．somethingD．everything
59．A．cheeringB．complainingC．thinkingD．fighting
60．A．stupidB．wiseC．impoliteD．normal．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：選擇題

14．The problem ________needs________at the moment．（　�。�
A．being discussed； to solveB．discussed； to solve
C．being discussed； solvingD．was discussed； to be solved

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：填空題

11．a(chǎn)dj．腦力的；思維的，需用才智的intellectual．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：短文改錯(cuò)

18．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Dear Mr．Li，
I'm very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning．I got up early as usually in the morning，but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycle's front tyre （輪胎）flat．I wanted to take bus or taxi to school，and I didn't have any money with me．I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing．Unluckily，there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning．So I had to walk to school，carrying my bicycle all the way．That's how I was late for school．
Please don't worry with my lessons，Mr．Li．I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：選擇題

8．No more typists are working on a typewriter or computer．（　�。�
A．打字員B．打字機(jī)C．作者D．信

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：閱讀理解

15．Keving Rogers used to be my boss．At that time he always told us to sell more．As soon as I could，I left his shop and got a new job in another place．The last time I saw Rogers was more than ten years ago．At least that's what I thought．But now I am not so sure．
I was on my way to my office in the centre of town．There is a small park nearby，which I sometimes walk through after lunch．The park was almost empty except for a shabby-looking man on one of those benches．The man looked about fifty years old and was wearing an old gray coat．It was cold and windy，and he was trembling．
"It's a long time since I had a meal．Can you help me？"he said．There was something about his voice that sounded familiar．I gave him a few pennies．As he went past me I looked at his face closely．I wondered where I had seen him before．Then it suddenly came to me．Could it possibly be…？No!Impossible，I thought．I watched him walking away．He was the same height as Rogers but looked a lot thinner than I remembered．
Yesterday I ran into someone who had worked for Rogers at the same time as I did，and had stayed on longer．I started telling him about the man I had seen in the park．"For a moment I thought it was our old boss．But it couldn't have been．Rogers must be the head of a company now．"I said．
My ex-workmate shook his head，"I thought you knew．""Knew？Knew what？What are you talking about？"
"Rogers was sent to prison six years ago．He's probably been out by now．For all I know he is sleeping on park benches and begging money from passers-by．"

21．Where did the writer last meet Rogers？A
A．In a small park．B．In a restaurant．
C．In the centre of town．D．In his office．
22．Which of the following happened first？B
A．Rogers was sent to prison．
B．The writer got a job in another place．
C．The writer saw Rogers ten years ago．
D．The ex-workmate left Rogers'company．
23．The story doesn't mention anything aboutC．
A．what happened to Rogers six years ago
B．what Rogers looked like
C．why Rogers was sent to prison
D．how Rogers was living on
24．The reason why the man was trembling was thatD．
A．he was ill                    B．he was very excited
C．he became very poor           D．he felt cold and hungry．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：填空題

12．Peopleadmire（欽佩） him more for the way he faces difficulties．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：完形填空

4．I was taken out of high school by my mother．I knew that my（31）D would become difficult because we were taught that we had to have an education to make （32）A in life．Since I was only 16，I really started feeling hopeless in life （33）C I didn't know what I was going to do．I worked to help my （34）D pay bills and that was all I could do at the time．Then she started telling me that when I turned 18I had to （35）Bthe house．
I couldn't understand what was going on because my brother was （36）A  than me and she didn't want to （37）B him out．As my 18th birthday was coming I was really beginning to feel （38）C because I didn't have an idea on what to do．
One night while I was （39）C television，an advertisement came on about joining the Navy．The next day I called the （40）A on the advertisement and set up an appointment to meet the recruiter （招募者）．When he （41）B about me not having a high school diploma he knew I had a （42）B chance．I explained to him that I was going to be homeless in a few （43）D．He told me he would （44）Awhat he could do．About two months later he called me and （45）B me to come to his office．I went in and he （46）B to me he would have to pull some strings （走走后門(mén)） to get me in the service （47）D I had to promise him that I would make the best of this opportunity he was trying to （48）A for me and I did．
Now I have a high （49）C in life that many people don't have and an ability to make my life a little （50）B with that decision I made and the help I received．

31．A．gameB．workC．studyD．life
32．A．itB．thatC．themD．this
33．A．beforeB．untilC．becauseD．though
34．A．fatherB．sisterC．brotherD．mother
35．A．a(chǎn)rrive atB．get out ofC．build upD．come into
36．A．olderB．youngerC．clevererD．higher
37．A．sendB．kickC．findD．work
38．A．carelessB．pennilessC．hopelessD．selfless
39．A．examiningB．noticingC．watchingD．observing
40．A．numberB．nameC．timeD．place
41．A．thoughtB．heardC．a(chǎn)rguedD．worried
42．A．bigB．smallC．thinD．thick
43．A．daysB．hoursC．minutesD．months
44．A．seeB．pointC．understandD．present
45．A．forcedB．orderedC．a(chǎn)dvisedD．a(chǎn)sked
46．A．repeatedB．explainedC．complainedD．a(chǎn)pologized
47．A．soB．orC．a(chǎn)sD．but
48．A．createB．rejectC．masterD．handle
49．A．organizationB．situationC．positionD．discovery
50．A．busierB．easierC．harderD．luckier

查看答案和解析>>

同步練習(xí)冊(cè)答案