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5．注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Nowadays，more and more parents send their children to famous schools，thought it can ensure that their children can be admitted by better universities after graduation．
 It is true that famous schools are furnishing with better teaching facilities．What's more，teachers are excellent，that come from all over the country and even abroad．They have the ability make classes more lively and interesting，so students will be able to accept knowledge better．Besides，not every student is fit to go to famous schools where there is a fierce competition among students．And students there have to work much harder than that in ordinary schools．
 I suggest effective measures are taken to make sure all the schools provide equal good education．Only in this way can all the students have equal rights to receive quality education．

Answer 1

分析 本文作者針對(duì)越來(lái)越多的家長(zhǎng)送孩子上名校的現(xiàn)象，分析了孩子們上名校的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，并提出了自己的建議，即采取有效的措施，確保所有的學(xué)校都能提供平等的良好教育，以便讓所有的學(xué)生都能平等地享有接受素質(zhì)教育的權(quán)利．

解答 Nowadays，more and more parents send their children to famous schools，thought it can
ensure that their children can be admitted by better universities after graduation．
 It is true that famous schools arefurnishingwith better teaching facilities．What's more，
teachers are excellent，that come from all over the country and even abroad．They have
the ability∧make classes more lively and interesting，so students will be able to accept
knowledge better．Besides，not every student is fit to go to famous schools where there
isa fierce competition among students．And students there have to work much harder than
that in ordinary schools．
 I suggest effective measuresaretaken to make sure all the schools provide equal good education．
Only in this way can all the students have equalrights to receive quality education．
詳解：
1．thought改為thinking   考查現(xiàn)在分詞    此處在句中作原因狀語(yǔ)，由于動(dòng)詞think與其邏輯主語(yǔ)more and more parents 構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞thinking．
2．by改為to/into   考查固定短語(yǔ)     be admitted to/into 意為：被錄��；故用to/into．  
3．furnishing改為furnished    考查固定短語(yǔ)    be furnished with 意為：提供，備有；故用furnished．
4．that改為who   考查關(guān)系代詞   本句為非限定性的定語(yǔ)從句；而that不能用于該從句中；由于先行詞teachers（指人）在該從句中作主語(yǔ)，故用who．
5．a(chǎn)bility 后加to    考查動(dòng)詞不定式    此處在句中作后置定語(yǔ)，修飾名詞the ability，意為：…的能力，應(yīng)使用動(dòng)詞不定式形式；故在ability 后加to．   
6．Besides改為However    考查上下文句意理解以及副詞    根據(jù)上文介紹了名校的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，以及下文提到：并不是每個(gè)學(xué)生都適合去競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈的名校學(xué)習(xí)；故此處表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用However．
7．去掉a     考查不可數(shù)名詞    competition在本句中的意思是：競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，角逐；是不可數(shù)名詞；故去掉 fierce 之前的a．
8．that改為those   考查指示代詞   此處指代的是那些在普通學(xué)校上學(xué)的學(xué)生們，故用those．
9．a(chǎn)re改為be    考查虛擬語(yǔ)氣    由于主句的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為"suggest"，故此處的賓語(yǔ)從句應(yīng)使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，即用"（should）+動(dòng)詞原形"的形式；故用be．
10．equal改為equally   考查副詞    本句的意思是：只有這樣，所有的學(xué)生才能平等地享有接受素質(zhì)教育的權(quán)利；此處用來(lái)修飾動(dòng)詞have，意為：平等地享有權(quán)利；故用equally．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)是集語(yǔ)法知識(shí)與語(yǔ)言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯、語(yǔ)法和語(yǔ)篇三要素的把握能力．錯(cuò)誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯(cuò)詞．常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤有：1 詞法錯(cuò)誤，主要包括動(dòng)詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見(jiàn)句法錯(cuò)誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問(wèn)句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯(cuò)誤．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．