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18．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起不計分）．
      I have been reading a book about Henry Ford．He was an eldest son of a farmer in Michigan．His father hoped he would help him on the farm，and Henry was not interested in farm work at all．He did everything he could keep away from it．Therefore，Henry was not a lazy boy．He was addicted in mechanical work．Later，Henry took a job as a mechanic，showing greatly interest in steam engines．In 1908，he had built the famous"Model T"．This car was popular that it was unchanging for twenty years．Five years after that，he started the Ford Motor Company，what made the US a nation on wheels and helped the US become what it is now．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹Henry Ford．他從小就對機械感興趣．后來他接受了一份機械工工作，開始對蒸汽機表現(xiàn)出極大的興趣．在1908，他創(chuàng)建了著名的"T型"車，這輛車在當時非常流行，二十年不變．五年后，他開辦福特汽車公司．

解答 I have been reading a book about Henry Ford．He was an eldest son of a farmer in Michigan．His father hoped he would help him on the farm，and Henry was not interested in farm work at all．He did everything he could∧keep away from it．Therefore，Henry was not a lazy boy．He was addicted in mechanical work．Later，Henry took a job as a mechanic，showing greatly interest in steam engines．In 1908，he had built the famous"Model T"．This car was∧popular that it was unchanging for twenty years．Five years after that，he started the Ford Motor Company，what made the US a nation on wheels and helped the US become what it is now．
詳解：
1．a(chǎn)n改為the 考查冠詞．eldest是形容詞最高級，其前加定冠詞the．
2．a(chǎn)nd改為but 考查連詞．前后兩個單句表示轉折關系，而非并列關系，用連詞but．
3．加to 考查動詞不定式．he could do是定語從句修飾先行詞everything，因主句中有did，從句中的do要省略，此處動詞不定式表示目的，作目的狀語．
4．Therefore改為However 考查副詞．however表示轉折，尤其用于談及一個既成事實時，表示轉折，其意為"可是""仍然"等．可放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗號與句子其他成分隔開．
5．in改為to 考查介詞．be addicted to意為"沉迷于"，是固定搭配．
6．greatly改為great 考查形容詞．interest是名詞，要用形容詞修飾．
7．the改為a 考查冠詞．Model是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指．
8．加so 考查固定搭配．so…that…意為"如此/這么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副詞，常常用來修飾形容詞或副詞，常用句型為：主語+謂語+so+adj．/adv．+that從句．
9．unchanging改為unchanged 考查動詞語態(tài)．it與unchange之間是動賓關系，要用一般過去時的被動語態(tài)．
10．what改為which 考查定語從句．分析句子結構可知這是一個定語從句，先行詞是前面整個句子，在從句中作主語，用關系代詞which．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．