Question

5．假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom上個(gè)月來(lái)到北京學(xué)習(xí)．7月份你將去北京參加英語(yǔ)演講比賽（speech contest），你在資料搜集和語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用等方面遇到了困難．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom寫一封電子郵件：
1．詢問(wèn)Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；
2．談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請(qǐng)求Tom幫忙；
3．告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他．
注意：詞數(shù)100詞左右；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Tom，
                                                                              
Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，由于是討論Tom現(xiàn)在的情況和自己的安排，所以應(yīng)該以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)為主，用第一人稱來(lái)敘述．主要分成三部分：一 詢問(wèn)Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；二 自己的困難并請(qǐng)求Tom幫忙；三
自己的打算．
高分句型：
1．It is reported that（引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句） the weather there is very hot and dry these days，which（引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句） is very different from that of your country
據(jù)說(shuō)那里的天氣又熱又干燥，完全不同于你們國(guó)家的天氣．
2．I am glad to tell you that （引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July，which（定語(yǔ)從句） is not only an honor，but also a great opportunity for me to improve myself
我非常高興的告訴你在七月份我要去北京參加一個(gè)英語(yǔ)演講比賽，這不僅是一份榮譽(yù)，而且是提高自我的一個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)．

解答 Dear Tom，
How time flies!You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month，during which you must have achieved a lot．Well，how's everything going？It is reported that the weather there is very hot and dry these days，which is very different from that of your country（高分句型一）．Have you adapted to it？In addition，you once complained that the food served there was not to you taste．I hope that should have been improved（詢問(wèn)Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況）．
I am glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July，which is not only an honor，but also a great opportunity for me to improve myself．（高分句型二） And now I try my best to make preparations for it．However，I have some trouble in collecting the materials relevant and using of the language．I will appreciate it if you give me a hand to solve the problems（自己的困難并請(qǐng)求Tom幫忙）．
After the contest，I am to drop in at your school to visit you．Please waiting for my phone（自己的打算）．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇半開(kāi)放性的作文，要點(diǎn)給出來(lái)的并不多，需要考生自行組織，同時(shí)也給考生一定的空間，在寫作時(shí)要注意謀篇布局．在寫作時(shí)要注意使用高級(jí)的詞匯與高級(jí)的句型，不要遺漏任何的要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接整個(gè)文章，使文章更有條理性．