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13．假設(shè)你班將舉行一次英語班會(huì)，主題為"如何做一個(gè)好學(xué)生"．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文．短文中須包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1 嚴(yán)格自律，刻苦學(xué)習(xí)
2 尊敬師長(zhǎng)，樂于助人
3 遵守校規(guī)，不染惡習(xí)
4 不無故曠課，不以強(qiáng)凌弱．
5 不斷進(jìn)步，實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)
注意：1 詞數(shù)：100左右．
2 內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫．
文章開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
It is important and necessary for us to be good students．But how can we become good students？

Answer 1

分析 分析要求可知，你班將舉行一次英語班會(huì)，主題為"如何做一個(gè)好學(xué)生"，客觀地介紹討論的情況．短文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱．詞數(shù)100左右，不要太多或太少．盡量多使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子之間的連貫性．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中用了一些高級(jí)的短語和句式．如：be addicted to doing、bulling the weak、While表示對(duì)比、have more time to spare，who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，形式主語it結(jié)構(gòu)等都很不錯(cuò)．

解答 How to be a good student
It is important and necessary for us to be good students．But how can we become good students？In my opinion，those who are strict with themselves and in their studies can be considered as good students while those with bad behaviors of smoking，drinking or being absent from classes without any reason are admitted to be bad ones．（高級(jí)句型）Being good students，we should show respect to our teachers and the elderly and be always ready to help others．Besides we must obey the school regulations，and try not to form the bad habits，such as being addicted to playing computer games，telling lies and teasing and bulling the weak．（高級(jí)句型）
In a word，good students are always trying their best to make constant progress so that they can achieve their goals．（高級(jí)句型）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡(jiǎn)單句而造成的單調(diào)感．（1）認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁．本文是議論文． （2）構(gòu)思要點(diǎn)．根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)．設(shè)計(jì)好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等，把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來，構(gòu)成文章框架．（3）選詞造句，避難選易．（4）認(rèn)真檢查，避免錯(cuò)誤．仔細(xì)閱讀全文，查找是否有錯(cuò)，注意時(shí)態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致．