Question

8．Chinese students celebrates their birthdays in different ways．And the most common way was to hold a birthday party，on which friends get together to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．On the birthday，one usually accepts nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents．Sometimes parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children．However，most children are looking forward to spending their own birthdays and enjoy themselves．Though birthday celebration is one of the important activity in one's life，it can be done in some more meaningful ways．For example，we can buy some flower or cook a delicious meal for our parents．Only in this way we express thanks to our parents in return for their love and care．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹中國(guó)學(xué)生是如何慶祝他們的生日的，并提出了一些慶祝生日的方法來(lái)回報(bào)對(duì)父母的愛(ài)和關(guān)心．

解答 Chinese students celebrates their birthdays in different ways．And the most common way was to hold a birthday party，onwhich friends get together to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．On the birthday，one usually accepts nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents．Sometimes parents will prepare∧a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children．However，most children are looking forward to spending their own birthdays and enjoy themselves．Though birthday celebration is one of the important activity in one's life，it can be done in some more meaningful ways．For example，we can buy some flower or cook a delicious meal for our parents．Only in this way∧we express thanks to our parents in return for their love and care．
詳解：
1．celebrates改為celebrate 考查主謂一致．主語(yǔ)students是復(fù)數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
2．was改為is 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．全文講述的是一般事實(shí)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
3．on改為at 考查介詞．這是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，at the party意為"在聚會(huì)上"，用介詞at．
4．a(chǎn)ccepts改為receives 考查詞語(yǔ)用法．a(chǎn)ccept表示主動(dòng)接受，receive表示被動(dòng)接受，此處應(yīng)是被動(dòng)接受．
5．加for 考查介詞．prepare for意為"（使）為…作準(zhǔn)備"，是固定搭配．
6．enjoy改為enjoying 考查動(dòng)名詞．a(chǎn)nd是并列連詞，它前后連接兩個(gè)相同的語(yǔ)法成分，spending和enjoying作look forward to的并列賓語(yǔ)．
7．Though改為Since/As 考查連詞．此處表示原因，用連詞Since/As，而非讓步關(guān)系．
8．a(chǎn)ctivity改為activities 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．one of意為"…之一"，后接名詞復(fù)數(shù)．
9．flower改為flowers 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)． flower是可數(shù)名詞，前面有some修飾時(shí)要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
10．加can 考查倒裝．only+狀語(yǔ)放在句首時(shí)，要作倒裝句，根據(jù)前文加情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can表示倒裝．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書(shū)信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺(jué)是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．