Question

9．雖然我國(guó)已于2011年5月1日頒布了室內(nèi)公共場(chǎng)所全面禁煙的法令，但由于種種原因，室內(nèi)公共場(chǎng)所全面禁煙仍難以實(shí)現(xiàn)．請(qǐng)你就以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明這一情況．
1．指出現(xiàn)狀（仍有大批人在室內(nèi)公共場(chǎng)所吸煙）；
2．分析原因（宣傳不夠、對(duì)吸煙者懲罰不重等）；
3．你的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
      2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
      3．開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
     I am happy to see that China put a ban on indoor public smoking on May 1st，2011．               ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于在公共場(chǎng)合禁止吸煙的議論文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)敘述．內(nèi)容主要包括：一指出現(xiàn)狀；二分析原因；三自己的看法．
高分句型：
1．But to achieve this goal，there is a long way to go，because there are still many smokers who continue to smoke in indoor pub-lic places．句子里to achieve this goal表示目的"為了實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)目標(biāo)"；who代指先行詞
many smokers 做定語(yǔ)從句的主語(yǔ)．
但是要想實(shí)現(xiàn)這目標(biāo)還有很長(zhǎng)的路要走，因?yàn)槿匀挥泻芏嗳嗽谑覂?nèi)的公共場(chǎng)合吸煙．
2．The first reason for the problem，I think，is that we haven't made the smoking ban known to the pub-lic．句子里I think是插入語(yǔ)；The first reason for the problem是主語(yǔ)；that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句；make sth done表示"讓某事被做"．
我認(rèn)為，存在這個(gè)問(wèn)題的第一個(gè)原因是，我們還沒(méi)有讓禁煙令被公眾所了解．

解答 I am happy to see that China put a ban on indoor public smoking on May 1st，2011．But to achieve this goal，there is a long way to go，because there are still many smokers who continue to smoke in indoor pub-lic places．【高分句型一】（指出現(xiàn)狀）
     The first reason for the problem，I think，is that we haven't made the smoking ban known to the pub-lic．【高分句型二】In fact，many people don't know about the ban at all．Secondly，those who smoke in indoor public places aren't punished enough．So they would rather smoke than follow the rule．（分析原因）
     In my opinion，on the one hand，we should let more people know about the ban； on the other hand，we should punish smokers who don't obey the rule harder．（自己的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類(lèi)作文．
在寫(xiě)作時(shí)長(zhǎng)句子肯定會(huì)成為作文的亮點(diǎn)，會(huì)使作文的檔次上升，例如定語(yǔ)從句，名詞性從句，狀語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用，但是這里有一個(gè)最基本的要求，那就是句子要正確，合理．不能畫(huà)蛇添足．這就要求學(xué)生在平時(shí)寫(xiě)作時(shí)就要多加練習(xí)，保證高考時(shí)用的句子是對(duì)的．