Question

6．針對(duì)學(xué)生身體素質(zhì)的不斷下降，教育部提出了在各校開展"陽(yáng)光體育"的活動(dòng)．目的是以此活動(dòng)改善學(xué)生體質(zhì)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)你校開展的情況及其帶來的益處，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇文章并簡(jiǎn)要發(fā)表你的看法．
參考詞匯：陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)  Sunshine Sports Campaign
詞數(shù)：120詞左右
Given the decline of students'fitness，the Department of Education has launched ________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
We can see the fact that in the sports courts more and more boys and girls are involved in various outdoor activities．
我們可以看到這樣一個(gè)事實(shí)：在運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)上，越來越多的男孩和女孩們都參與了各種戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)．
本句是同位語(yǔ)從句，that從句解釋說明的正是 the fact 的具體內(nèi)容．
句型二：
It  not only enriches our school life but helps us relieve some stress from studies．
它不僅豐富了我們的學(xué)校生活，而且還幫助我們緩解了一些學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力．
并列連詞not only …but （also）"不但…，而且…"在本句中連接了兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)部分；其中，but之后的also可以省略．

解答 A possible version：
Given the decline of the students'fitness，the Department of Education has launched Sunshine Sports Campaign，which is aimed at improving students'health．（補(bǔ)充該項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的目的；即提出論點(diǎn)）
This campaign is well welcome to most of the students in our school because they are free to choose what they like to participate in and have more time to take exercise．We can see the fact that in the sports courts more and more boys and girls are involved in various outdoor activities．【高分句型一】（論述了該項(xiàng)活動(dòng)在我校的開展情況）It not only enriches our school life but helps us relieve some stress from studies．【高分句型二】After exercising，we feel satisfied and refreshed．What's more，it also develops our efficiency in our class lessons．（論證了開展該項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的好處．）
Surely，I like it．I hope this activity should be promoted continuously．Through this campaign，we teenagers will form a lifelong habit of doing sports..（總結(jié)自己的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 首先應(yīng)注意議論文寫作的三個(gè)要素：1、提出論點(diǎn)；2、組織論據(jù)，進(jìn)行論證；3、得出結(jié)論； 其次，除了學(xué)會(huì)套用一些常用的句型和短語(yǔ)外，還需要根據(jù)題目的具體內(nèi)容和要求，靈活地選用句式；另外，根據(jù)句子語(yǔ)氣的需要，可在英語(yǔ)句中適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾右恍┣閼B(tài)動(dòng)詞"should/can/may/had better/must"，以及句與句之間合理使用一些并列、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折等關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)，這樣，議論文的結(jié)構(gòu)會(huì)更加嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，更具說服力和感染力．