Question

假定你是李華，上時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)有外籍教師在絡(luò)上輔導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)，因此發(fā)帖向在線外籍教師Peter尋求幫助。要點(diǎn)包括：
1．自我介紹（姓名、身份及年級(jí)）；
2．英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況、困難及感受：
3．請(qǐng)求給予幫助。
注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；
2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。
Dear Peter,
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua,a senior student from China, I’m very happy to find that some foreign teachers help students with oral English on line along with your contact information . So I can’t wait to post this message to you .
I’ve learnt a lot from my school teachers in the past six years and known about three thousand English words and some basic grammar. I can do some reading and writing in English now. but I still have difficulty in listening and speaking .I always feel nervous when talking with native speakers.
That’s why I am writing to you. It would be nice if you could do me a favor. I’m looking forward to chatting with you often.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題解析：本文是一篇記敘文的寫(xiě)作，發(fā)帖向在線外籍教師Peter尋求幫助在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上輔導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)，主要包括： 1．要點(diǎn)：自我介紹（姓名、身份及年級(jí)）；英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況、困難及感受；請(qǐng)求給予幫助。2.人稱(chēng)：使用第一人稱(chēng)為主；3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；4.注意使用一些連詞或插入語(yǔ)使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢；5.使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以提高文章的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
文章使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子給文章增色，如So I can’t wait to post this message to you .（can’t wait to do sth,迫不及待地做某事），I still have difficulty in listening and speaking .（have difficulty in doing sth，做某事有困難）That’s why I am writing to you.（That’s why ….名詞性從句，那是…的原因），I’m looking forward to chatting with you often.（look forward to + doing 期待著做某事）。