Question

雙鴨山市近期對公眾開放了城市博物館，現招聘志愿者做博物館導游。要求：
　　 (1)具有為人民服務的熱情;
　　 (2)掌握豐富的雙鴨山歷史地理文化知識，既是服務人員，也是文化的使者;
　　 (3)具有流利的口語表達能力，能做好溝通工作。
請根據以上要求，寫一封博物館導游志愿者的申請信。
要求：100詞左右; 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear Sir or Madam,　　       
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter._____________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam，
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. With the opening of the City Museum, I’d like very much to be a volunteer as a guide.
Above all, I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished citizens from all over the city. Besides, I have a rich knowledge of Shuang Yashan’s history, geography and culture, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture. What’s more, as we all know, oral expression as an important skill, plays an important role in communication with the guests, and I am good at it. I can express myself fluently and clearly with a standard accent.
To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.
Yours,

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【亮點說明】范文中出現了常用的詞組和句型： taking your time to do To sum up,總之， Above all,最重要的是，  have a rich knowledge of非常了解，not only…but also…不但，而且， 句型有：as we all know, oral expression as an important skill, plays an important role in communication with the guests, and I am good at it. 這句話用了定語從句， I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.這句話里面有定語從句。
還有文章還使用了 Besides, What’s more,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。
考點：考查提綱類書面表達