Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（   ），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

Answer 1

【小題1】加to
【小題2】come→came
【小題3】have→having
【小題4】immediate→immediately
【小題5】on→at
【小題6】Neither→None
【小題7】was→were
【小題8】刪除were或looked
【小題9】and→but
【小題10】a→an

解析試題分析：
【小題1】want后加to 考查不定式。want后跟不定式作賓語，故wanted后加to。
【小題2】come→came 考查時(shí)態(tài)。上下文都是過去時(shí)，故此處也用過去時(shí)。come改為came。
【小題3】have→having 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。have應(yīng)改為having，現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語。
【小題4】immediate→immediately 考查副詞用法。此處應(yīng)用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞jumped，故immediate→immediately。
【小題5】on→at 考查動(dòng)詞短語。shoot sth at sth 把……射向……，故on→at
【小題6】Neither→None. 考查代詞。此處的箭不是兩支，故Neither→None.
【小題7】was→were 考查主謂一致。主語為復(fù)數(shù)，故was→were。
【小題8】刪除were或looked 考查固定句型。Were和looked不能連用，必須去掉一個(gè)。
【小題9】and→but 考查連詞。兩個(gè)分句之間不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故and→but。
【小題10】a→an 考查冠詞。impressive是以元音音素開頭的單詞，故用an。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文糾錯(cuò)