Question

11．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
How early must a student begin preparing for an international education？Lisa Jain，the representative of The College Board in India showed her idea here clearly．
Many students who want to study abroad believe they need to start planning for it only in Grade12．What they don't realize is the amount of time，thought，and effort it requires．That is why a student should begin the ground work in Grade 10in order to gain a clear undestanding of what the college application process requires and to be prepared to deal with the pressures that will follow．
Focus on school grades and marks．It is important to try your best to perform well in academics throughout high school and not just in Grade 12．
Start gaining experience．Get involved in a small number of activities ove a long period of time，such as a sport，the arts，writing，research，community work，etc，through which you create impact in the activity，climb to a leadership position，grow as a person and develop skills．Picking something in Grade 12and claiming it's your passion won't work．
Begin research．Which country do you want to apply to colleges in？What do you want to study at college？Researching early and start reflecting on what you'd enjoy learning will make the college and major selection process less overwhelming in Grade 12．
All your efforts in Grade 10-11will help ease your burden in Grade 12．If you do everything at the right time，you will find the process enjoyable and realize there is hardly a reason to stress．Just remember：The early birds catch the worms!
寫作內(nèi)容
1．用約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．用約120個(gè)詞就"The early birds catch the worms．"談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）你如何理解"The early birds catch the worms．"這一諺語？
（2）以你或他人的經(jīng)歷說明一切成功源于凡事早做規(guī)劃，充足準(zhǔn)備．
（3）如何才能成為"the early birds"？
寫作要求
1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子．
2．作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．
In the passage，Lisa Jain offered her advice to those wanting to study abroad，pointing out that，to be prepared，a student should begin the ground work early in Grade 10，like focusing on good grades from the very beginning．
The early birds catch the worms!What a thought-provoking proverb，which reminds us to plan ahead of time and make full preparations so as to achieve success．In my opinion，"the early birds"means the people who always make early plans and adequate preparations，and"catch worms"indicates catching opportunities and harvesting success．Just as another saying goes，opportunities are for those who are prepared．Only if a person has an early start to get everything ready can he possess the ability to seize the chance and accomplish his goal．
Yu Ming Hong，the founder of the famous educational institution New Oriental，is a good illustration of the truth that success lies in an early start and good preparations． When studying in Peking university，aiming to find a good job in Beijing after graduation，Yu Ming Hong decided to improve his major English．So，from the freshman year，he kept reciting words every day and stuck to it all the way through his college life． With an early start and constant efforts，by the time he graduated，he had become the student who had the largest vocabulary among his classmates，which contributed directly to his good grades in English and thus he successfully became an English teacher in Peking University and later set up the well-known school．Undoubtedly，it was his"being the early bird"that brought him his success today．
Therefore，be an early bird，and you will find it pays off．But how？First of all，a clear goal is essential，which will lead us to where we want to go．Secondly，plan the day and manage our time．Early birds never fails to carefully plan and make the best of his time．And then painstaking efforts follow．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語：offered sth to sb （提供某物給某人…），point out（指出），focus on（集中在…），a thought-provoking proverb （一個(gè)發(fā)人深省的諺語），remind us to do sth（提醒某人做某事），ahead of time （提前），make full preparations（作充分準(zhǔn)備），so as to…（為了…），seize the chance（抓住機(jī)會(huì)），accomplish one's goal（實(shí)現(xiàn)某人的目標(biāo)），lie in（在于…），aim to do sth（目的在于），stick to…（堅(jiān)持…），contribute to（為…作貢獻(xiàn)；促成），set up（建立…），pay off （獲得成功），fail to do sth（沒能做某事），make the best of one's time（充分利用時(shí)間）．
【高分句型一】
1．What a thought-provoking proverb，which reminds us to plan ahead of time and make full preparations so as to achieve success．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
【高分句型二】
2．"the early birds"means the people who always make early plans and adequate preparations，
此處是"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"the people"．
【高分句型三】
3．Only if a person has an early start to get everything ready can he possess the ability to seize the chance and accomplish his goal．
此處是部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，結(jié)構(gòu)為"Only+【狀語成分：介詞短語/when、if引導(dǎo)的從句/時(shí)間副詞】+一般疑問句形式"．
【高分句型四】
4．①When studying in Peking university，②aiming to find a good job in Beijing after graduation，Yu Ming Hong decided to improve his major English．
①此處是由連詞"when"引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句中的省略，可以理解為"When Yu Ming Hong was studying in Peking university"．
②此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語"aiming to do…"作目的狀語，主句為"Yu Ming Hong decided to improve his major English"，主句的主語為"Yu Ming Hong"與動(dòng)詞"aim"構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．
【高分句型五】
5．With an early start and constant efforts，by the time he graduated，he had become the student ①who had the largest vocabulary among his classmates，②which contributed directly to his good grades in English and thus he successfully became an English teacher in Peking University and later set up the well-known school．
①此處為關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"the student"，"who"在從句中主語．
②此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 In the passage，Lisa Jain offered her advice to those wanting to study abroad，pointing out that，to be prepared，a student should begin the ground work early in Grade 10，like focusing on good grades from the very beginning．（概括）
The early birds catch the worms!What a thought-provoking proverb，which reminds us to plan ahead of time and make full preparations so as to achieve success．【高分句型一】In my opinion，"the early birds"means the people who always make early plans and adequate preparations，【高分句型二】and"catch worms"indicates catching opportunities and harvesting success．Just as another saying goes，opportunities are for those who are prepared．Only if a person has an early start to get everything ready can he possess the ability to seize the chance and accomplish his goal．【高分句型三】（如何理解這一諺語）
Yu Ming Hong，the founder of the famous educational institution New Oriental，is a good illustration of the truth that success lies in an early start and good preparations． When studying in Peking university，aiming to find a good job in Beijing after graduation，Yu Ming Hong decided to improve his major English．【高分句型四】So，from the freshman year，he kept reciting words every day and stuck to it all the way through his college life． With an early start and constant efforts，by the time he graduated，he had become the student who had the largest vocabulary among his classmates，which contributed directly to his good grades in English and thus he successfully became an English teacher in Peking University and later set up the well-known school．【高分句型五】Undoubtedly，it was his"being the early bird"that brought him his success today．（以他人的經(jīng)歷說明一切成功源于凡事早做規(guī)劃，充足準(zhǔn)備）
Therefore，be an early bird，and you will find it pays off．But how？First of all，a clear goal is essential，which will lead us to where we want to go．Secondly，plan the day and manage our time．Early birds never fails to carefully plan and make the best of his time．And then painstaking efforts follow．（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：如何才能成為"the early birds"）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．