Question

11．假設(shè)你校舉辦看圖征文活動(dòng)，題目為"How to protect your eyesight"．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，指出圖中所反映的現(xiàn)象，并從閱讀時(shí)間，光線，眼保健操及睡眠等方面，談?wù)劚Ｗo(hù)眼睛的具體做法．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100-120字；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：近視-----near-sighted
眼保健操------eye exercise
How to protect our eyesight
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
As far as I am concerned①，measures should be taken②to protect our eyesight．我個(gè)人認(rèn)為，應(yīng)該采取一些措施來(lái)保護(hù)我們的視力．
①As far as I am concerned意為：我個(gè)人認(rèn)為，就我個(gè)人而言．
②由于主語(yǔ)measures與動(dòng)詞take構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)形式，即should be taken．
句型二：
Thirdly，doing eye exercises ①regularly every day is a great necessity②．
第三，每天都做眼保健操是非常必要的．
①doing eye exercises 為動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)，表示抽象動(dòng)作．
②a great necessity指一件有必要的事情，其中necessity是可數(shù)名詞．

解答 How to Protect Our Eyesight
       Now in schools，more and more students got near-sighted．As is shown in the picture，more than 80% of the students in our class wear glasses．（指出了圖中所反映的現(xiàn)象）And it's not difficult to find the causes to this phenomenon．
       Long time of studying in the classroom with no time to refresh our eyesight is one of the causes．I think poor light is also the cause because our eyes easily get tired in the poor light．In addition，lack of sleep also contributes to this result．（分析了三個(gè)導(dǎo)致近視的原因）
       As far as I am concerned，measures should be taken to protect our eyesight．【高分句型一】Firstly，students should be given more time to do some exercise to refresh ourselves．Secondly，learning conditions need to be improved，especially the poor light in the class room．Thirdly，doing eye exercises regularly every day is a great necessity【高分句型二】．Besides，enough sleep also contributes to the improvement．（提出了四點(diǎn)保護(hù)眼睛的做法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．