Question

【題目】假定你是李華,寒假在多倫多學(xué)習(xí),從下圖海報(bào)得知當(dāng)?shù)匾粋�(gè)普通話冬令營(yíng)正在招募志愿者. 請(qǐng)寫一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者,內(nèi)容包括：

1. 寫信目的；

2. 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；

3. 你的期待.

注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).

Dear Sir/Madam：

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a high school student from China. Knowing that some volunteers are needed for your Mandarin winter camp, I'm so excited and writing to recommend myself.

Firstly, coming from China gives me an advantage over other applicants. Secondly, I'm outgoing and have positive team spirit, which will help me work better with other staff members. What's more, I'm patient and helpful, and able to get along well with children. Most importantly, now I'm in Toronto, thus making it convenient for me to be devoted to voluntary work. I also expect to experience different cultures and learn more about the local life.

I'd appreciate it if you could give me a chance. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇申請(qǐng)信。內(nèi)容要求你根據(jù)海報(bào)內(nèi)容寫一封申請(qǐng)信，表明自己想做志愿者。

根據(jù)寫作要求看，這是一個(gè)應(yīng)用文寫作，結(jié)合海報(bào)要求，寫一封申請(qǐng)信，申請(qǐng)做志愿者。通過審題，可知這篇作文需要使用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行寫作。寫作要求已給出：1. 寫信目的；2. 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；3. 你的期待。屬于提綱性作文。寫作時(shí)需注意：一是內(nèi)容要結(jié)合海報(bào)上的要求來寫；二是要詳略得當(dāng),本文要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，結(jié)合要點(diǎn)可知，對(duì)個(gè)人申請(qǐng)做志愿者的優(yōu)勢(shì)要重點(diǎn)去描述，個(gè)人期待可以簡(jiǎn)寫。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié),個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)的描述要有代表性述，展開的內(nèi)容要和主題有關(guān)系，切勿天馬行空，胡亂發(fā)展；四要恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞,以使行文連貫。最后在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用。