Question

“目標(biāo)”在人們成長(zhǎng)的路上發(fā)揮著重要的作用，在高三尤為重要。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，按以下提示，準(zhǔn)備一篇英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿，在英語(yǔ)課上與同學(xué)們作交流。
目標(biāo)的重要性；
如何設(shè)立目標(biāo)；
談?wù)勀愕慕�期目�?biāo)；
如何實(shí)現(xiàn)你的目標(biāo)。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)120左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear classmates,
It’s a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I’d like to share my thought about goals with you.
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Wish you to realize your dreams. That’s all. Thank you! 

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear classmates,
It’s a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I’d like to share my thought about goals with you.
There is no denying that goals are important especially for seniors because they act as maps guiding you to where you are heading for. With a clear direction you will straightly get what you want.
In my view, goals are not difficult to set. First, you should make clear what you really want. What’s more, it’s essential to make detailed plans which can be carried out step by step.
My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.
To achieve this, not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared, but also I will keep an positive attitude towards ups and downs in life. (127)
Wish you to realize your dreams. That’s all. Thank you!

試題解析：從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫(xiě)作，主要讓學(xué)生以“目標(biāo)在人們成長(zhǎng)的路上發(fā)揮著重要的作用，在高三尤為重要”為主題展開(kāi)敘述，內(nèi)容應(yīng)從包括以下四個(gè)方面來(lái)：一 ：目標(biāo)的重要性。二：如何設(shè)立目標(biāo)。三：談?wù)勀愕慕�期目�?biāo)。四：如何實(shí)現(xiàn)你的目標(biāo)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
文章使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子給文章增色，如head for 朝…走，you will straightly get what you want你將直接得到你想要的東西（what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句），My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.（so that 引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句）not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared, but also I will keep an positive attitude towards ups and downs in life.（notonly…but also 引導(dǎo)的并列句，且位于句首構(gòu)成了倒裝句，并且主語(yǔ)了句子的銜接如：What’s more，In my view等。