Question

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

Answer 1

【小題1】friend 加S.
【小題2】it 改為one
【小題3】that改為which
【小題4】my father后加for
【小題5】He 改為I 
【小題6】after the school去掉the.
【小題7】pleasing 改pleased
【小題8】after改gave
【小題9】gives改gave
【小題10】much刪掉。

解析【小題1】friend 加S.         考查名詞。句意：當(dāng)我上高中時，許多的朋友有自行車。Most of 后面加名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。
【小題2】it 改為one          考查代詞。句意：我希望能有一輛。One 指同一類中的不同個。It代指同一內(nèi)容。
【小題3】that改為which      考查定語從句。句意：有一天我看到一輛二手自行車，它只賣100元。Which代指a second-hand bicycle，這是非限制性定語從句，故不用that.
【小題4】my father后加for     考查介詞。 句意：我要求父親給我買。Ask sb for sth，向某人索要某物。
【小題5】He 改為I            考查人稱代詞。句意：我必須得負(fù)擔(dān)另外一半的錢。提到是我而不是父親。
【小題6】after the school去掉the. 考查固定短語。After school放學(xué)后。
【小題7】pleasing 改pleased      考查形容詞。句意：我的父親很高興當(dāng)我一個月后給他錢時。修飾人用pleased。
【小題8】after改為later.          考查固定搭配。A month later,一個月后。
【小題9】gives改gave           考查時態(tài)。整體文章用一般過去時來講述，用改成一般過去時。
【小題10】much刪掉。         考查感嘆句。句意：你能想象當(dāng)我自己騎車去學(xué)校時有多么快樂嗎.how +形容詞+主語+謂語，感嘆句的構(gòu)成。
考點(diǎn)：短文改錯。