假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。                               文中10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(^ ), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改:在錯的詞下劃一條橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;  2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從11處起)不計分。
Tom is a senior two students who devotes himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses. In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, Tom was about to study when his father came up and advised him to have break. Soon they had a good idea. They bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Tom enjoyed fly the kite himself. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Tom was energetic and actively in class. He said it was only why he had a better weekend.


【小題1】students改成student
【小題2】studies改成studied
【小題3】too改成so
【小題4】In改成On
【小題5】have后面加a
【小題6】去掉it
【小題7】fly改成flying
【小題8】but改成and
【小題9】actively改成active
【小題10】why改成because

解析試題分析:文章介紹湯姆是個勤奮的學(xué)生,周末都不休息,但是因為太疲勞效果不好,爸爸建議他好好休息一下,全家人到郊區(qū)野餐,放風(fēng)箏,玩得很愉快,星期一,湯姆也能精力充沛的上課。
【小題1】湯姆是個高二學(xué)生,因為是單數(shù),所以students改成student
【小題2】在晚上,他在家學(xué)習(xí)到深夜。因為是上個星期六的事情,用一般過去時:studies改成studied
【小題3】他太困太累以至于不能有效的學(xué)習(xí)。這里用so…that句型:too改成so
【小題4】在星期天的早上用介詞In
【小題5】他剛要學(xué)習(xí)這時爸爸過來建議他休息一下。詞組:have a break休息一下
【小題6】他們買了一個非常喜歡的風(fēng)箏。這句話用了定語從句,先行詞是kite,定語從句省略的關(guān)系代詞,所以定語從句中應(yīng)該缺少賓語,去掉it
【小題7】他們到了郊區(qū),在那里湯姆自己玩放風(fēng)箏。Enjoy后面接動名詞:fly改成flying
【小題8】全家人一起野餐,在戶外感覺很放松。這兩句話是并列關(guān)系:but改成and
【小題9】星期一的時候,湯姆在教室里面精力充沛很積極。和energetic并列做表語,應(yīng)該是形容詞: actively改成active
【小題10】他說這只是因為他度過了一個很好的周末。This is why“那就是為什么”,改成That is because“那就是因為”
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