Question

8．學(xué)校正在組織科技創(chuàng)新大賽，你想為日常生活中某件物品（如鋼筆、書(shū)包、鞋子…）設(shè)計(jì)添加新功能來(lái)參賽．請(qǐng)以"My Magic"為題寫(xiě)～篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹你的創(chuàng)意．
內(nèi)容：
1．說(shuō)明設(shè)計(jì)理由
2．介紹新功能．
注意；：
1．詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)t
2．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇說(shuō)明文，所給的要點(diǎn)很清楚：說(shuō)明學(xué)生所選物品設(shè)計(jì)理由；介紹此物品新功能．屬于提綱作文．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)．時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：necessity．（必需品），be familiar with t（對(duì)…..熟悉），not only …..but also…..（不但…．而且…．），come across（偶遇），aspect（方面）．

解答 My magic pen
  Pens are necessities for every student．So we are all familiar with them．（設(shè)計(jì)理由）
     I designed my pen．On one hand，it is easy to carry．On the other hand，it's used not only for writing but also for other important aspects．【高分句型】Firstly，I put some batteries in the pen and fix a light bulb，so when it is dark on my way home or to school．I can use it for a flasher．I won't be afraid of darkness any more．Secondly，I fix a tiny clock in the pen，so I can know the time and I don't have to wear my watch．At last，I put a sharp knife on the top of the pen．I can either use it for cutting things or even protecting myself when I come across danger．（新功能）
       Such is the pen which I designed．Isn't it useful and attractive？

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．