Question

假如你叫周銘，給你的美國網(wǎng)友Paul寫一封信，告知他你所在新學校的情況。
信中需包括以下要點。
學校概況：學校人數(shù)（約兩千），學校環(huán)境如何（可自主描述）。
簡要介紹所在班級（高一六班）和新同學、新老師情況 尤其是班主任工作認真負責，幫助你在學習上取得了很大的進步。   
你進入高中的感受和打算。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100字左右 2. 可適當添加內(nèi)容，使文章銜接順，內(nèi)容完整
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Yours,
Zhou Ming

Answer 1

How is it going? I’m writing to tell you something about my new school, which I think you must be interested in.
Now I’ve become a senior high school student. My new school is amazing. There are about 2000students studying in it, and the campus is very beautiful with all kinds of trees and flowers. I almost fell in love with it at the first sight. I am in Class 6, Grade one. The teachers here are every enthusiastic, patient and kind-hearted. They are strict with us students but take good care of us. Especially my headteacher. He is a serious and strict man called Mr chen. With his help, I have made great progress in my study. I have been here for two weeks and I have made friends with my classmates, who are lively and hardworking.
Going to a famous university is my goal. Therefore, I will try my best to make progress in all the subjects and do well in exams. I believe my dream will come true!
How is your school life?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhou Ming

試題分析：：這是一篇提綱式作文：題目已經(jīng)交代的具體情況，也給了適當?shù)囊�點，因此考生首先要根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，適當增加細節(jié)，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】I’m writing to tell you something about my new school, which I think you must be interested in.這句話用了非限制性定語從句， I almost fell in love with it at the first sight.這句話用了fall in love with和at the first sight 兩個詞組， They are strict with us students but take good care of us.這句話用了be strict with和take good care of兩個詞組， He is a serious and strict man called Mr chen. 這句話用了過去分詞做定語， I have been here for two weeks and I have made friends with my classmates, who are lively and hardworking.這句話也用了定語從句， Going to a famous university is my goal.這句話是動名詞做主語， I will try my best to make progress in all the subjects and do well in exams. 這句話用了try one’s best to do和make progress兩個詞組。