Question

假設(shè)你是陽光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李軍，你和在北京上學(xué)的英國朋友Jack約好下周末去上海旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件：
1.表示歉意； 2. 解釋原因；3. 另約時間。
                                                                                             
                                                                                
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                               
                                                                                  

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Shanghai with you next week, which I have promised. I feel sorry about it and want you to know what has happened.
Just now, my cousin, Li Qiong, who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he will return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know, we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.  I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Shanghai. Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jun

試題分析：本題是書信類作文，要求寫一封電子郵件，因為不能赴約向杰克表示歉意；解釋原因；還有另約時間。材料已給出，寫作的時候關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。還要有適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗�同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。審題時注意本文使用一般過去時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。
【亮點說明】I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Shanghai with you next week, which I have promised.這句話用了非限制性定語從句， I feel sorry about it and want you to know what has happened.這句話用了賓語從句， Just now, my cousin, Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he will return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. 這句話用了定語從句和賓語從句， I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Shanghai. 這句話用了動名詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.這句話用了過去分詞做定語。