Question

6．Doctor Chen收到侄子陳坤的來信提到學(xué)校最近有不少的同學(xué)得了紅眼病．假如你是Doctor Chen，請你給你的侄子回一封信，提出預(yù)防紅眼病的建議．
內(nèi)容要點如下：
1．小心謹(jǐn)慎，但不必恐慌．
2．盡量少去公共場所．
3．養(yǎng)成良好衛(wèi)生的個人生活習(xí)慣，如勤洗手，不揉眼．
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要求：
1．詞數(shù)120個字左右．已給出的句子不計入總詞數(shù)．
2．必須包括全部要點，語句通順．書寫規(guī)范．
3．至少補充兩點建議．
4．文中不能透露真實個人信息．
參考詞匯：紅眼病the pink eyes    rub one's eye揉眼   毛巾towel   臉盆washbasin
被感染的infected
注意：參考詞匯不要求在文章中全部使用．
Dear Chen Kun，
I am delighted to receive your letter asking me how to prevent ourselves from the pink eyes．
       ．
Yours，
Uncle Chen．

Answer 1

分析 題目要求給侄子陳坤寫一封回信，就預(yù)防紅眼病提出自己的建議．寫作要點包括：小心謹(jǐn)慎；少去公共場所；養(yǎng)成良好個人習(xí)慣等，至少補充兩點建議；詞數(shù)在120詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾不計入總詞數(shù)；不能透露個人信息；作文必須包含所有要點，使語句通順；不出現(xiàn)拼寫和標(biāo)點錯誤，書寫規(guī)范，字體美觀；注意使用參考詞匯；注意建議信的格式和時態(tài)．
亮點說明：
范文使用了省略if possible；定語從句which makes it less likely to expose ourselves to the disease；主語從句what we'd better do；時間狀語從句when we are in the classroom；條件句if my suggestions are taken into consideration；賓語從句that they will assist you in preventing the disease等語法知識，避免了句式單一，使作文內(nèi)容充實；
范文使用了一些短語和搭配：put forward；faced with；expose oneself to；avoid doing；such as；are supposed to；as well as；in no sense/in no case；more than等，使作文內(nèi)容變得充實，提升了作文的檔次；
范文使用了較多的重點詞匯：constructive，proposal，cautious，scared，frequently，infected，sincerely等，做到了學(xué)以致用，重點詞匯的使用也提升了作文的水平；
范文注意使用First of all，Besides，What's more，More importantly等銜接句子和段落，使行文連貫、通順．

解答 Dear Chen Kun，
    I am delighted to receive your letter asking me how to prevent ourselves from the pink eyes． I'm writing to put forward some constructive proposals．（高分句型）
First of all，faced with the disease，we are supposed to be cautious but do not be scared．（高分句型）It's a good idea for us to avoid going to the public places if possible，which makes it less likely to expose ourselves to the disease．（高分句型）Besides，what we'd better do is keep healthy living habits，including washing our hands frequently as well as not rubbing our eyes with the hands．What's more，in no sense/in no case will we share the items such as the towel and the washbasin with the infected person．More importantly，we do remember to keep the air fresh by opening the window often，especially when we are in the classroom．（高分句型）
      I would be more than happy if my suggestions are taken into consideration and sincerely hope that they will assist you in preventing the disease．（高分句型）
    Yours，
     Uncle Chen

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．