Question

假設(shè)你叫李津，現(xiàn)在在英國工作，你的朋友陳立寫信告訴你他打算赴英留學(xué)，想知道初到英國可能會遇到的困難。請你用英語給他寫一封回信，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1.可能會遇到的困難：語言方面的障礙、飲食的不習(xí)慣、想家、孤獨等；
2.鼓勵他并表示愿意幫助他。
注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于l 00字。
2.信的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Chen Li,
I’m glad to hear from you.You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK.
                                               
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin

Answer 1

Dear Chen Li,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK. Now, I’d like to tell you something about it.
First, you may have the problem about the language you think you are well prepared.You may find it difficult to communication with the natives, because many of them have a strong accent. Besides, you may not get used to the western food here or even hate to have it. What’s more, you may feel lonely and miss your family and friends, especially in the very beginning.
However, you needn’t worry about it. Several weeks later, you will get used to everything here and love the place, and I’ll also try my best to help you when necessary.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin

試題分析：題目要求給陳立寫一封回信，告訴他赴英留學(xué)可能會遇到的困難。題目是常見的書信類作文，學(xué)生比較容易下筆�？梢苑殖扇�部分，第一部分總寫，第二部分重點分析會遇到的困難；第三部分提出幫助。注意書信的格式要正確；使用第一人稱進行寫作；正確使用標(biāo)點符號，單詞拼寫要正確；注意不要出現(xiàn)時態(tài)、語法方面的錯誤。
【亮點說明】范文注意使用Now, First, Besides, What’s more, However, Several weeks later, and等來銜接上下文，使作文看起來很緊湊，并且很有條理；
范文使用了定語從句(that) you think you are well prepared；固定句型find it difficult to communication with the natives；原因狀語從句because many of them have a strong accent；try my best to help you省略when (it is) necessary等重點語法知識，有較強的語法功底；
范文海使用了一些短語和固定搭配，如：get used to, hate to have it, I’d like to, feel lonely, in the very beginning, worry about等，使作文變得充實、生動。