5.假如你是Andy,在高中英語的學(xué)習(xí)中遇到了一些困難和問題,你給在美國的筆友Susan寫信,希望得到她的幫助. 1.學(xué)習(xí)英語興趣不大; 2.單詞總是記不; 3.對口語沒有信心,害怕出錯誤,不敢張口說,也不愿意參與小組討論; 4.閱讀中遇到生詞,不知如何處理;要求:1.提出以上四個英語學(xué)習(xí)中的問題; 2.也可以根據(jù)自己的實際適當發(fā)揮; 3.中心突出,語意連貫,層次清晰,書寫規(guī)范; 4.不少于100字 5.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù).
Dear Susan,
I am very pleased to write to you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Andy.

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假如你是Andy,在高中英語的學(xué)習(xí)中遇到了一些困難和問題,你給在美國的筆友Susan寫信,希望得到她的幫助,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點包括:學(xué)習(xí)英語興趣不大; 單詞總是記不; 對口語沒有信心,害怕出錯誤,不敢張口說,也不愿意參與小組討論; 閱讀中遇到生詞,不知如何處理; 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:
高分句型一:
I am not very interested in English and I have difficulties remembering new words.
句中使用短語有"be interested in sth 對…感興趣"、"have difficulty doing sth  做某事有困難".這句話意為:我對英語不感興趣,而且記新單詞有困難.
高分句型二:
I spend a lot of time trying to learn the new words by heart,but I always forget a lot.
句中使用短語有:spend+時間+doing sth 做某事花費多長時間;try to do sth 盡力做某事.這句話意為:我很用心地花了大量時間在學(xué)習(xí)新單詞上,但是我總是忘記.

解答 Dear Susan,
       I'm very pleased to write to you.I am not getting along well with my English.(開篇點題)I am not very interested in English and I have difficulties remembering new words.【高分句型一】I am afraid of making mistakes and I am afraid to discuss in groups.Besides,I don't know how to deal with the new words in reading.I spend a lot of time trying to learn the new words by heart,but I always forget a lot.【高分句型二】And I find grammar is too difficult for me.I can't make complete sentences and I often make mistakes in grammar.(學(xué)習(xí)英語的困難)What should I do?Please give me some advice.(尋求幫助)
                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Andy

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

練習(xí)冊系列答案
相關(guān)習(xí)題

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:閱讀理解

15.Bali is a tiny island that is part of Indonesia(印度尼西亞) today.It is a pretty island that has many mountains and a pleasant climate.For a long time,Bali was cut off from much of the world.
The people of Bali were happy and had a peaceful life.They were not allowed to fight.At one time there had been terrible wars on Bali.Then the people decided it was wrong to fight or have wars.They made rules to keep apart those people who wanted to fight.
Bali was divided into seven small kingdoms.The land around each kingdom was kept empty,and no one lived there.Since the kingdoms did not share the same borders(邊界),the people could not fight about them.
On Bali,even children were not allowed to fight.If two children started a fight over a toy,someone separated them.When two boys argued,they would agree not to speak to each other.Sometimes they did not talk together for months; this gave the boys a chance to forget their anger.
Families who were angry with each other also promised not to speak.Their promise was written down,and the whole village knew about it.If they broke their promise,they had to offer gifts to their gods.

28.Bali is an island belonging toC.
A.Europe
B.Africa
C.Asia
D.America
29.The people of BaliD.
A.fought for a long time
B.quarreled about their borders
C.is cut off from much of the world
D.lived a happy and peaceful life
30.How did the people of Bali prevent fighting from breaking out?D.
A.They shared the same borders.
B.The island was divided into seven kingdoms.
C.They made strict rules to punish those who wanted to fight.
D.Land was kept empty around each kingdom and no one lived there.
31.Which of the following is NOT true according to the passage?D.
A.At one time there were terrible wars on the island.
B.You'll hardly see children fighting on the island.
C.Bali is a beautiful island with many mountains and nice weather.
D.People had to offer gifts to the villagers if they broke their promise.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源:四川省內(nèi)江市2017屆高三第五次模擬考試英語試卷 題型:完形填空

For many years,drivers of electric trains in the UK were at risk from bird strikes.When they were travelling at high speeds,a____hitting the front of the train could____the windscreen of the driving cab.I once had a pigeon break the offside window into pieces at only 40 mi/h.The pigeon didn't____,but I did—I am alive!

In an effort to provide a better degree of____and reduce delays,of course,research was done to find a ___toughened glass windscreen for____.As part of this research,____was sought from airline suppliers,who said that a good test for ant new glass type was to fire a chicken at high speed____the window material.The____was soon set up and a number of dead chickens obtained.

Even though it was of a standard used by____,the test with the first chicken showed that the glass was not____enough.A second test____broke the glass.Another test damaged the third windscreen!Repeated____showed that no glass could____the chicken being fired at it.More advice was sought from the airline people,who could not understand____the glass they offered could withstand(禁得。゛irborne bird strikes but____failing the railway tests. They decided to come to____test.

The railway research team set up a____test and sent someone to obtain more chickens.____the chickens arrived,it was then that the airline experts realized what was wrong.They told the railway research team."You know,you do____to defrost(解凍)the chickens first."

1.A. device B. chicken C. bird D. stone

2.A. keep out B. pass through C. escape from D. take away

3.A. fly B. appear C. fall D. survive

4.A. safety B. speed C. travel D. temperature

5.A. heavy B. bright C. suitable D. flat

6.A. passengers B. drivers C. animals D. pilots

7.A. information B. energy C. courage D. advice

8.A. off B. towards C. beyond D. across

9.A. test B. research C. business D. organization

10.A. government B. army C. railways D. airlines

11.A. popular B. attractive C. tough D. transparent

12.A. also B. then C. ever D. only

13.A. changes B. attempts C. events D. ideas

14.A. reflect B. prevent C. separate D. resist

15.A. whether B. how C. why D. when

16.A. avoided B. kept C. stood D. stopped

17.A. witness B. cancel C. prove D. correct

18.A. strange B. strict C. new D. necessary

19.A. The moment B. Now that C. Even if D. In case

20.A. manage B. agree C. expect D. have

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源:云南省昆明市2017屆高三5月復(fù)習(xí)適應(yīng)性檢測英語試卷 題型:短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Last year, I went to Australia for a short-term study like an international student. One of my classmates suggested we shared our favorite recipes for foods from our own countries during New Year’s party. We all agreed to this wonderful idea and cooked my unique dishes for the party. Hariyati from Indonesia shared a kind of cookie what was shaped like elephant ears. Susan from South Africa prepared some sweep dumplings packed in several banana leaf. Chiemi from Japan cooked special rice balls mixing with fish. And I was served Daoxiao noodles, my hometown—Shanxi’s local food. These variously foods were all delicious. Therefore, my favorite was still Chinese food.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源:云南省昆明市2017屆高三5月復(fù)習(xí)適應(yīng)性檢測英語試卷 題型:閱讀理解

Bike Share Toronto is the city’s official bike share program, designed to give locals and visitors a fun, affordable and convenient alternative to walking, taxis, buses and the subway. There are 200 Bike Share Toronto stations and 2,000 bikes across the city, making Bike Share the most accessible way to get around and explore.

How it works

●Become an Annual Member or buy a day Pass to access the system.

●Find an available bike nearby, and get a ride code or use your member key to unlock it.

●Take as many short rides as you want while your pass or membership is active.

●Return your bike to any station, and wait for the green light on the dock(停靠點)to make sure it’s locked.

Choose a plan

●For visitors

Day Pass: $7. Unlimited 30-minute rides in a 24-hour period.

3-Day Pass: $15. Unlimited 30-minute rides in a 72-hour period.

●For locals

Monthly Pass: $25. Unlimited 30-minute rides for a month.

Annual Membership: $90. Unlimited 30-minute rides for a whole year. The Annual Membership is the best deal for locals of Toronto and other frequent riders.

The first 30 minutes of each ride is included with the membership or pass price. Avoid extra fees by dropping off your bike every 30 minutes at any other station. If you keep a bike out for longer than 30 minutes at a time, you will be charged an extra $1.50 for the first 30 minutes over, $4 for the next 30 minutes, and $7 for each additional 30 minutes after that.

Contact us

●Customer Service: (855)898-2388

●Repair Service: (855)-2378

●Corporation Partners: (855)898-2398

●Employment Opportunities: (855)898-2498

1.Which is the most suitable choice for locals in Toronto?

A. Day Pass B. 3-Day Pass

C. Monthly Pass D. Annual Membership

2.How much will the extra fee be if you travel for two hours by bike?

A. $5.5 B. $9.5

C. $12.5 d. $15.5

3.For more information about working at Bike Share Toronto, contact it at _________.

A. (855)898-2399 B. (855)898-2378

C. (855)8989-2398 D. (855) 898-2498

4.Which of the following statement is TRUE?

A. A member can get a code or a key to the bike

B. Bike Share Toronto is a non-profit organization

C. Shared bikes have taken the place of other vehicles

D. The green light on the dock shows the bike is unlocked

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:填空題

10.The two brothers decided to go to America to try their fortune.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:填空題

17.most of the artistsinvitedto the party were from that university.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:短文改錯

14.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:
1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分.
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.He didn't want share things with other people.For an example,when he bought a chocolate cake,he put them in a secret place where I could not find.Then he eats it all by himself.He never helped other.He said he was busy.In fact,a game of tennis making him very busy.He didn't care if something he did made people angrily.For instance,in a cold night he played strong and loud music till 4o'clock in the morning.But he is different now.He often helps Grandma with housework,mom with cooking and his classmates their lessons.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:書面表達

15.假定你是李華,剛獲得全校英語演講比賽一等獎.請給你的外教Jack寫一封英語感謝信,要點如下:
1.表示感謝;
2.回顧Jack對你的幫助和指導(dǎo);
3.寶貴經(jīng)驗.
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫.
Dear Jack,
I'm writing to tell you good news that I have won the first prize in our school's English Speech Contest.(高分句型一)I really appreciate your guidance and great help.
Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest,I'll never forget the great progress I made with your help.(高分句型二)Not only did you correct the mistakes in my pronunciation,you also recommended wonderful English speech videos for me to imitate.What's more,it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident,which played a vital role in winning the contest.(高分句型三)
Through the contest,I've realized that only when we set a goal and work hard towards it can we gain success in the end.
Many thanks again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

查看答案和解析>>

同步練習(xí)冊答案