Question

10．最近，校園安全成為人們廣泛關(guān)注的話題，為確保師生安全，你校決定禁止外人進(jìn)入校園．為此，學(xué)校在學(xué)生中做了一次"家長該不該進(jìn)校園及其原因"的調(diào)查．調(diào)查結(jié)果如圖所示：
       
根據(jù)上圖信息，請以"Should parents be banned from entering campus？"為題，用英語寫一篇短文．
要求如下：
1．簡要描述圖中的信息（包括人數(shù)比率、觀點(diǎn)及原因）；2．談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
 （2）符合語言規(guī)范；
 （3）在答題卡上作答；
 （4）標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）
Should parents be banned from entering campus？
                                                                                   

Answer 1

分析 分析題干可知，本文寫作時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，文章可使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)以及固定短語．
寫作過程：
第一：闡述最近校園安全存在的問題；To ensure security，為了確保安全；
第二：根據(jù)調(diào)查，進(jìn)行分析；60% of the students think parents should be included；
25% subscribe to the view that there is no need for a ban as their parents come to school to meet their children or the teachers and they couldn't be a danger to anyone，百分之25的學(xué)生認(rèn)為，通過學(xué)校聯(lián)系，家長可以進(jìn)校；
第三：發(fā)表個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)．As the saying goes prevention is better than cure，預(yù)防比治療更好．

解答 Should parents be banned from entering campus？
    Recently，campus security has become a hot issue．To ensure security，strangers are banned from entering campus of our school，and a survey has been made among the students about whether parents should be included．（高分句型一）
    According to the survey，60% of the students think parents should be included because it is a rule everyone should obey．（高分句型二）Another 25% subscribe to the view that there is no need for a ban as their parents come to school to meet their children or the teachers and they couldn't be a danger to anyone．However，the rest think the guards can make a proper decision depending on certain situations．
    Personally，I agree with the first．As the saying goes，"Prevention is better than cure．"Proper measures should be taken before it's too late．As for parents，they have some other ways to keep in touch with their children，like making calls or asking for teachers'help．（高分句型三）All in all，campus security calls for everyone's concern and cooperation．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧