Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Nowadays, " the sense of happiness" has been repeatedly mentioned in various medias.  CCTV did a nation-wide survey by asking random passers-by： " Are you happy now? What exactly is happiness in your eyes?" The survey aroused a heated discussion across the country and people from all walks of life expressed their opinions.
" I would say I'm pretty happy at present because my dear daughter has graduated from college and found herself a decent job. " said a woman in her fifties with a big smile on her face.
Though it seemed that most people said they were happy, different voices were still heard and should not be ignored. A migrant worker’s(農(nóng)民工) reply was  "My family name is Zeng", showing his  determination to refuse the interview as well as his annoyance to mention happiness.
The brand-new Chinese Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan answered " I don't know " in an interview when he was asked the same question.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1.以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2.以約120個詞就“幸福”的話題談談你的想法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）目前你是否感到幸福及其原因；
（2）請描述到現(xiàn)在為止讓你覺得最幸福的一件事情；
（3）談談你對幸福的理解。
【寫作要求】
1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構的故事．也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】 概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

Answer 1

When asked by the CCTV whether they were happy, most people gave a positive answer while some didn't. The Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan said he didn't know whether he was happy or not.
At present, I am pretty happy because I am doing what I like and I like what I am doing. As a Senior Three student, I am studying hard every day and live it to the fullest. It is good to work with my determined classmates to fulfill our dreams.
When I recall the happy things which happened to me, the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped them all. It was a time when my family was going through extreme financial difficulties. So I made up my mind to win the scholarship, hoping to lighten my parents' financial burden. After making tons of painstaking efforts, I succeeded. At the ceremony, I could see my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman, yet with the brightest smile. It was the happiest thing ever happening to me that I will treasure for the rest of my life.
As far as I am concerned, happiness lies in the effort of making those we love smile. When we bring them happiness , it gives happiness to ourselves.

試題分析：考查議論文寫作。本文的話題是“幸�！保豢忌�直接表達自己對于目前的情況是否感覺到幸福，同時說明自己的具體的原因�？忌�可以從自己生活中尋找一個讓自己感覺幸福的事例來展開說明自己對幸福的理解；幸福其實就是一種自我價值的實現(xiàn)。要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
點評：寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意題目要求必須使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。